Merge pull request #191 from 18F/frontend-content-edits

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ekip/everykid/templates/parents.html

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ <h1>Parents and guardians</h1>
 
     <p>“The wilderness holds answers to questions man has not yet learned to ask.” <span class="author">– NANCY NEWHALL</span></p>
 
-    <p>Your child can take you amazing places! With the pass, fourth graders can bring family and friends on adventures for free for a full year.</p>
+    <p>Your child can take you amazing places! With the pass, fourth graders can bring family and friends on adventures free for a full year.</p>
 
     <div class="parents-more">
       Learn More
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ <h2>Official Rules</h2>
       <div class="section-content why">
         <h2>Why fourth graders</h2>
         <p>We chose fourth graders because research shows that kids ages nine to 11 are beginning to learn about the world around them. They’re open to new ideas, and they are likely to connect to nature and our history.</p>
-        <p>This year is just the start! We’ll offer the pass to fourth graders every year. Over time, all kids will get the chance to explore our country.</p>
+        <p>This year is just the start! We’ll offer the pass to fourth graders every year. Over time, all kids can get a free pass to explore our country.</p>
         <img src="{% static "img/parents-fishing.jpg" %}" alt="family fishing" />
       </div>
     </li>