Jetpack: Reduce title length in siteless post-checkout UI

[keoshi]

Changes proposed in this Pull Request

• Reduce title length in siteless post-checkout UI.
• Move product name to the description below.

Testing instructions

• Fire up this branch.
• Go to Jetpack.com and select a product.
• Once in the checkout, replace http://wordpress.com for http://calypso.localhost:3000 in the URL.
• Complete the purchase.
• In the post-purchase UI, confirm you see the changes.

Screenshots

Before	After

[github-actions]

Link to Calypso live: https://calypso.live?image=registry.a8c.com/calypso/app:build-16591
Link to Jetpack Cloud live: https://calypso.live?image=registry.a8c.com/calypso/app:build-16591&env=jetpack

[madebynoam]

@keoshi LGTM. If you want to avoid the passive voice, we could also do:

"We'll activate your subscription soon."

[matticbot]

Here is how your PR affects size of JS and CSS bundles shipped to the user's browser:

Sections (~12 bytes added 📈 [gzipped])

name      parsed_size           gzip_size
checkout       +107 B  (+0.0%)      +12 B  (+0.0%)

Sections contain code specific for a given set of routes. Is downloaded and parsed only when a particular route is navigated to.

Legend

What is parsed and gzip size?

Parsed Size: Uncompressed size of the JS and CSS files. This much code needs to be parsed and stored in memory.
Gzip Size: Compressed size of the JS and CSS files. This much data needs to be downloaded over network.

Generated by performance advisor bot at iscalypsofastyet.com.

[rcanepa]

LGTM.

Looks much better now!

This made me realize we have the same issue on the UI we show after a successful transfer.

Is this something you can handle? If not, I would happily add a ticket to our Maintenance board.

[eeeeevon13]

Nice.

[keoshi]

@rcanepa I believe that change was made already: https://github.com/Automattic/wp-calypso/pull/56937/files#diff-e3c5865394c7fd90760e374a2d5b9ab749bc1534e13b535a5a01304b5af417e6R54 — I cannot find other instances of that string, is there any other place I should be looking at?

[rcanepa]

@rcanepa I believe that change was made already: https://github.com/Automattic/wp-calypso/pull/56937/files#diff-e3c5865394c7fd90760e374a2d5b9ab749bc1534e13b535a5a01304b5af417e6R54 — I cannot find other instances of that string, is there any other place I should be looking at?

Oh, I can't believe I missed that. You're right. This PR handles both UIs: the one for users who get their subscriptions automatically provisioned and the one for those who don't.

🚢

[a8ci18n]

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