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CamDawg committed May 25, 2022
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5 changes: 5 additions & 0 deletions eefixpack/files/tph/bgee.tph
Expand Up @@ -43,6 +43,11 @@ INCLUDE ~eefixpack/files/tph/a7/anim_3001.tph~ // fix missing creature animation
// clck31 available in bp, but missing in armor exclusionlist (fixed in sod)
APPEND ~itemexcl.2da~ ~clck31 1~ UNLESS ~^clck31[ %TAB%]~ // clck31 available via black pits

// tbd, cam
// dupe text for wild surges: https://forums.beamdog.com/discussion/comment/1169266/#Comment_1169266
COPY_EXISTING ~wildmag.2da~ ~override~
REPLACE_TEXTUALLY ~SPWM109\([ %TAB%]+\)[0-9]+~ ~SPWM109\131725~ // wrong text for surge

/*
luke
**splprot.2da**
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3 changes: 2 additions & 1 deletion eefixpack/languages/en_us/gtu_bg2ee.tra
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And wherever you go, people stand aside. You have gained great power, and no one will ever take it from you again.~ [NARR05]

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// manual fix: had sound file narr01 assigned, but changed to narr04 to match oBG2 (pointless regardless: string is unused _ sound file doesn't exist)
@1763 = ~As you leave Suldanessellar, you are nearly overwhelmed by the cheering of the assembled crowds. There is open gratitude on the faces of the elves, and many times you are encouraged to stop and receive gifts or shake hands. There is an obvious lament at your departure, as well as an expectation of your return. They consider you a hero and, for once, you really feel the part.

You pass into the Forest of Tethir, wondering if there could have been a future for you in the city that you have left behind. You examine the amulet around your neck, studying the images of elven gods inlaid in the platinum, and you feel the warm tingle of the item's magic. This gift will remind you of how welcome a visitor you would be—but it also bears witness to the fact that you are without a true home, a place where you belong. You could return to Athkatla, you think, but deep inside, you feel the taint that yet remains in your soul.

There can be no home for you yet, as hard as that is to admit, so you venture deeper into the forest, pondering the words of demons and growing annoyed at how destiny holds its secrets from your view.~ [NARR01]
There can be no home for you yet, as hard as that is to admit, so you venture deeper into the forest, pondering the words of demons and growing annoyed at how destiny holds its secrets from your view.~ [NARR04]

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@1783 = ~How exactly is she ruining her own reputation? By being kind to those less fortunate?~
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3 changes: 3 additions & 0 deletions eefixpack/languages/en_us/gtu_bgee.tra
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Then you shall know that I am well pleased
I must pass these four warders to descend to the lower level. I assume that one of them will have the wardstone required to operate this lift that they are guarding. What would honor this warder? What will cause his sword, his Pride, to show his glory. He mentions chronicles of deeds. Obviously, I must find and read these chronicles. The trick is in finding them. What could Durlag have intended with this puzzle? I must solve it to pass.~

// Well-spoken shouldn't be hypehnated, as it's noe being used as an adjective
@21537 = ~Well spoken, land-dweller. You may have the monster's corpse if such is your wish.~

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@21716 = ~'Tis too much gold for my purse.~

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8 changes: 7 additions & 1 deletion eefixpack/languages/en_us/gtu_iwdee.tra
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@7829 = ~Container of Razorvine Extract~

// added "Tower" at the end
@8529 = ~A desperate plan was created that would ensure this would never happen. All the artifacts within Sehanine tower were set to release their magic so that the tower would destroy itself. Before these energies were released, however, we planned to lead as many of the orcs and goblins as we could into Sehanine Tower.~

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@8705 = ~This bottle of elven wine also has the properties of a healing potion. During one of the elven festivals, the priests of the Seldarine's Hand imbibed too much that day and accidentally added a barrel of elven wine to a mixture that was intended for healing potions.

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@15170 = ~...free... my... people...
...Astrolabe... whirls... twirls...~ [LARR_02]

// "learn source" > "learn the source"
@15200 = ~We seek to learn the source of the evil that troubles the North.~

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@15883 = ~Inspired by your foster father's colorful tales of rogues and scoundrels, you have spent your childhood yearning for intrigue. On the stage of your imagination, the ambling, preoccupied monks of the keep have often played the secret lords of Waterdeep, their purses ripe targets for your nimble fingers. On more than one occasion Gorion has asked you to very tactfully return a pen or an inkwell to the pocket from which it came. The more valuable of the keep's treasures remain impenetrable to your wiles, but you have little desire to steal from your benefactors anyway; you long for more appropriate and accessible pickings.~

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@41284 = "~ Hungarian Translation ~

~ By András Oroszi and Peter Methall ~"
~ By András Oroszi and Peter Methall ~"
10 changes: 10 additions & 0 deletions eefixpack/languages/en_us/gtu_pstee.tra
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@66806 = ~Forked-Tongue told me that the portal out of the crater, the one that will return me to Curst, is under the tailbone of the massive skeleton. He expressed delight that I should be traveling through its arse-end.~

// "gems that serves as its eyes." > "gems that serve as its eyes."
@66898 = ~AEGIS OF TORMENT
Special:
+3 to Constitution
+15 to Base Hit Points
+3 to Armor Class
Weight: 0

Rows and rows of minute skulls line the outer edge of this ring. It is crowned by an over-sized skull with fire-red gems that serve as its eyes. This ring is the physical manifestation of the suffering of the tormented slaves of Dahnthur. It was their ultimate wish to gain protection from their oppressors, and with this magical ring, their wish was finally realized. Even with the fiery red gems, a royal purple hue continually emanates outward.~

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@66912 = ~"You... I... cannot..." She suddenly freezes, and she speaks slowly, carefully, as if her voice frightens her. "The truth is this: you are one who dies many deaths. These deaths have given the knowing of all things mortal, and in your hand lies the spark of life... and death. Those that die near you carry a trace of themselves that you can bring forth..."~

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