adds Danny's story fixes

datausa/story/stories/04-04-2016_are-we-having-fun-yet.yml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 title: "Are we having fun yet? Who works in the Arts, Entertainment, and Recreation industry."
-description: "Who can resist an industry where workers get to choose the colors of their jelly beans."
+description: "Who can resist an industry where workers get to choose the colors of their jelly beans?"
 background_image: "/static/img/story/theater.jpg"
 authors:
   - name: "Danny Bachman, Ph.D."
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ authors:
       - "Dr. Bachman is a native of Philadelphia. He has a B.A. from Johns Hopkins and Ph.D. from Brown University. Dr. Bachman lives in Rockville, Maryland with his wife, but without his two millennial children, who—evidently defying the odds—have not returned home after college. Yet."
 topics:
   - description:
-      - "In an economy of growing wealth, certain industries stand out as ripe for growth. Arts, Entertainment, and Recreation is one of these. And it’s an industry that looks pretty appealing to work in. Athletes! Rock stars! Movie directors! These are all occupations that help define this industry—and who can resist an industry where workers get to choose the colors of their jelly beans."
+      - "In an economy of growing wealth, certain industries stand out as ripe for growth. Arts, Entertainment, and Recreation is one of these. And it’s an industry that looks pretty appealing to work in. Athletes! Rock stars! Movie directors! These are all occupations that help define this industry—and who can resist an industry where workers get to choose the colors of their jelly beans?"
       - "Now, not everybody who works in the industry is a rock star—or an athlete.  But a surprising share of employees in the industry do, in fact, have something to do with athletics. The tree map for occupations in Arts, Entertainment, and Recreation (below) shows that a few categories related to athletics (recreation and fitness workers, Lifeguards, and athletes, coaches and related workers) make up about 15% of workers in the industry. But that’s about it. Most of the other workers are generic service industry workers. Cashiers, cooks, ground maintenance workers, janitors and so on have to live on reflected glamor. Actors, writers, producers, dancers make up at most about 2% of the industry’s employees."
     viz_url: "/profile/naics/71/workforce/tmap_top_occs"
   - description:

datausa/story/stories/04-04-2016_the-well-heeled-philosophy-major.yml

@@ -15,5 +15,5 @@ topics:
   - description:
       - "Just how do philosophy majors make money? The tree map shows that philosophy majors work largely in Management, business, science and arts occupations. The specific occupations that stand out are mostly well paid:  Lawyers, judges, magistrates and other judicial officials ($184,000), postsecondary teachers ($70,000), miscellaneous managers ($105,000), elementary and middle school teachers (an outlier among these at just $45,000), and physicians and surgeons ($194,000). Many of the wide variety of management and business support occupations where philosophy majors can be found are also paid above average salaries."
       - "Just what is it that Philosophy majors bring to the table? O*Net shows that the strong training in verbal skills (reading, writing, speaking active listening) as well as critical thinking are the key strengths of Philosophy majors. Skill in these areas must provide substantial value in legal and management occupations—enough that majoring in philosophy is no handicap when it ultimately comes to pay."
-      - "So the next time you meet a philosophy major, don’t feel guilty about having him (about two-thirds of philosophy majors are 2/3 male) buy you a drink. He can afford it."
+      - "So the next time you meet a philosophy major, don’t feel guilty about having him (about two-thirds of philosophy majors male) buy you a drink. He can afford it."
     viz_url: "/profile/cip/38/skills/radar"