adjust a few expressions, add paragraphs, add internal comments

docs/puj/LittleIslands_001.md

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 > Buē seⁿ Tsu A-ngiâu, soiⁿ seⁿ Hóuⁿ-thek-chio̍h.
 
-  Hái-suaⁿ N̂g-mâng-táu Chhiŏⁿ-phīⁿ-suaⁿ, suaⁿ-kha khò-hái ŭ kuá₊-kò tuā-chio̍h-kŏu; chio̍h-kŏu sio-oi liáu ta-ng seⁿ kâi tāng, tāng-lăi ou-thiⁿ-tī-àm. Hí-tsūn-soiⁿ, ngĭ-kun thâu-ló Tsu A-ngiâu sio-thâi kàn-su--nâng liáu tsáu kàu tāng-lăi, khai-tǹg lău-hóuⁿ sì-kha thí-khui pêⁿ-iōⁿ, tah-tuè tāng-téng nap-uh --kò, pī-khui kuaⁿ-piaⁿ liáu-ău tsáu-khṳ̀ Thâi-uan. Tshṳ́-tsăi Hóuⁿ-thek-chio̍h nguân-tsăi tŏ hái-kîⁿ-kha, niàⁿ tang-pôiⁿ Thâi-uan --kò, tǹg-kuè mōⁿ-tio̍h hn̆g-hn̆g --kâi chhin-nâng hiò-seⁿ.
+  Hái-suaⁿ N̂g-mâng-táu Chhiŏⁿ-phīⁿ-suaⁿ, suaⁿ-kha khò-hái ŭ kuá₊-kò tuā-chio̍h-kŏu; chio̍h-kŏu sio-oi liáu ta-ng seⁿ kâi tāng, tāng-lăi ou-thiⁿ-tī-àm. Hí-tsūn-soiⁿ, ngĭ-kun thâu-ló Tsu A-ngiâu sio-thâi kàn-su--nâng liáu tsáu kàu tāng-lăi, khai-tǹg lău-hóuⁿ sì-kha thí-khui pêⁿ-iōⁿ, tah-tuè tāng-téng nap-uh --kò, pī-khui kuaⁿ-piaⁿ liáu-ău tsáu-khṳ̀ Thâi-uan. Tshṳ́-tsăi Hóuⁿ-thek-chio̍h nguân-tsăi tŏ hái-kîⁿ-kha, niàⁿ tùi kâi-hái, tǹg-kuè mōⁿ-tio̍h hn̆g-hn̆g --kâi chhin-nâng hiò-seⁿ.
+<!-- 注：原文中写 “遥对台湾”，事实上虎踢石并非朝东，因此上述更改为 “向对个海”。以前老友曾提过一个小小的民俗，现在想来，黄芒乡无论住宅、祠堂、庙宇，大多数大门西向，甚至石龟等等也是西向，不知是何缘故。 -->
 
 &nbsp;&nbsp;Chheng-chhiâu Sŭn-tī nîⁿ_kan, Hái-suaⁿ N̂g-mâng-hioⁿ ŭ kâi lia̍h-hṳ̂-kiáⁿ-tĭ, sèⁿ Tsu, miâⁿ A-ngiâu, seⁿ-lâi thiⁿ-kûiⁿ-nâng-tuā, bâi_tshou ma̍k_tuā-lia̍p. Yi tsṳ̆-sòi tuè khûn-thâu-sai o̍h khang-khuè, sang-chhiú sái nŏⁿ-thûi, hḿ&#x002D;&#x002D;khí-lâi hĭ_hŭ_lŭ_kiò; nŏⁿ-chiah chhiú-kóu tuā-tuā-tsat, tǹg ŭ tshoiⁿ-kṳn-la̍t. Jí-kâi Tsu A-ngiâu, tsṳ̆-liáu ŭ jîn-ngĭ, tsuan khòng-khà &#x002D;&#x002D;nâng⁎ ûi-hui-tsak-tái, tú-tio̍h &#x002D;&#x002D;nâng⁎ khùn-khóu zŭ kháng-khài kiù-chì, ŭ-kàu khuah-pak, thong-hioⁿ-lí o-ló &#x002D;&#x002D;i.
 
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 &nbsp;&nbsp;Tsu A-ngiâu ŏi-tsai jiò-seⁿ tsóng-tio̍h jiá-huă, zŭ tshuē tĭ-hiaⁿ&#x002D;&#x002D;hué lâi tsham-siâng khí-ngĭ. Chèng-nâng khṳh hiá kuaⁿ-hú hāi kàu chhi-lău-tshám, kâi-kâi thiaⁿ-liáu⁎ chhiông_chhiông_kiò, tuaⁿ-tī Tsu A-ngiâu &#x002D;&#x002D;kâi pió-tĭ Khóu Mêng táⁿ_sòi ùiⁿ-sṳ̄, pé-pa̍k tàⁿ-: "A-hiaⁿ, nán nâng_chió, ùiⁿ-tit oh-mue̍h; â-sĭ kuaⁿ-hú phài-piaⁿ lâi tia̍p &#x002D;&#x002D;nán, kiáuⁿ-ùiⁿ nán lóng-tsóng tio̍h khṳ̀ sṳ̀-pài hu̍t-tsóu." A-ngiâu tuah-tàⁿ-: "Tsău-huán kah tio̍h huân-ló tiâu-miāⁿ?!" Liáu, Tsu A-ngiâu kah khûn khiau-kiáⁿ tĭ-hiaⁿ zŭ liū-khí ngĭ-kî, jît-jît liān khang-khuè, tsún-pĭ kah kuaⁿ-piaⁿ sio-thâi.
 
-&nbsp;&nbsp;Tsok-tsok, niôⁿ-chhe&#x002D;&#x002D;hué tsáu tńg-khṳ̀ Kūiⁿ-gê, pò-tàⁿ Hái-suaⁿ Tsu A-ngiâu ma̍k_bô-uâng-huap, pong-puăⁿ niôⁿ-chhe, kàu-phiâⁿ-nâng boh-àiⁿ tsău-huán. Kūiⁿ-lĕng thiaⁿ-liáu⁎ hué_to̍h, chiat-sî kiò piaⁿ-kiáⁿ tah-tsûn khṳ̀ Hái-suaⁿ lia̍h Tsu A-ngiâu, boh-àiⁿ thâi-koi_kà-kâu. Tsu A-ngiâu thiaⁿ &#x002D;&#x002D;nâng⁎ pò-tsai, méⁿ-méⁿ tuà tĭ-hiaⁿ&#x002D;&#x002D;hué sái-tsûn khṳ̀ kah in kàn tiāⁿ-tio̍h. Kuaⁿ-piaⁿ tsōi-kâi bŏi-năi huang-éng, tsûn sái buē-kàu Sam-sṳ̆, hiá-nâng tsá-tsá zŭ khṳh tsûn iô kàu tiām thòu, kâi-kâi ou-àm-hîn. Tsu A-ngiâu kiò-nâng bī-lo̍h-hái lia̍h tsûn-tói tsha̍k phuà-khang, tsûn che̍k-ē tîm, kuaⁿ-piaⁿ zn̂g-kâi thiàu-hái; chèng-tĭ-hiaⁿ ló tsûn-téng tsang kùn lia̍h kuaⁿ-piaⁿ&#x002D;&#x002D;hué lóng-tsóng hìn-hòng-sí.
+&nbsp;&nbsp;Tsok-tsok, niôⁿ-chhe&#x002D;&#x002D;hué tsáu tńg-khṳ̀ Kūiⁿ-gê, pò-tàⁿ Hái-suaⁿ Tsu A-ngiâu ma̍k_bô-uâng-huap, pong-puăⁿ niôⁿ-chhe, kàu-phiâⁿ-nâng boh-àiⁿ tsău-huán. Kūiⁿ-lĕng thiaⁿ-liáu⁎ hué_to̍h, chiat-sî kiò piaⁿ-kiáⁿ tah-tsûn khṳ̀ Hái-suaⁿ lia̍h Tsu A-ngiâu, boh-àiⁿ thâi-koi_kà-kâu. Tsu A-ngiâu thiaⁿ &#x002D;&#x002D;nâng⁎ pò-tsai, méⁿ-méⁿ tuà tĭ-hiaⁿ&#x002D;&#x002D;hué sái-tsûn khṳ̀ kah in kàn tiāⁿ-tio̍h. Kuaⁿ-piaⁿ tsōi-kâi bŏi-năi huang-éng, tsûn sái buē-kàu Sam-sṳ̆, hiá-nâng tsá-tsá zŭ khṳh tsûn iô kàu tiām thòu, kâi-kâi ou-àm-hîn. Tsu A-ngiâu kiò-nâng bī-lo̍h-hái lia̍h tsûn-tói tsha̍k phuà-khang, tsûn che̍k-ē tîm, kuaⁿ-piaⁿ zn̂g-kâi thiàu-hái; chèng-tĭ-hiaⁿ ló tsûn-téng tsang₊ kùn lia̍h kuaⁿ-piaⁿ&#x002D;&#x002D;hué lóng-tsóng hìn-hòng-sí.
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+&nbsp;&nbsp;Tsu A-ngiâu thâu-pái kàn-iâⁿ, hioⁿ-lí-nâng su-ho̍k i ŭ-khiàu-tsúi iŭ ŭ-táⁿ, kâi-kâi lâi tâu &#x002D;&#x002D;i, chiàⁿ kúi-jît &#x002D;&#x002D;tiaⁿ, ngĭ-kun zŭ-ŭ saⁿ-peh-guā nâng. Tsu A-ngiâu hăm tĭ-hiaⁿ&#x002D;&#x002D;hué tsham-siâng liáu, suán N̂g-mâng Lí-hṳ̂-suaⁿ lâi siu tsúi-chē, hău-lĕng tàⁿ Hái-suaⁿ kak-kò hioⁿ-tshng hí-tshù pá-tsháu &#x002D;&#x002D;kâi lóng tio̍h kàu N̂g-mâng sio-hŭ siu tsúi-chē, bô-lâi &#x002D;&#x002D;kâi tsŏ-sí. Au tsóng-kuán sah-tsò i-lăi ke-teng kâi-kâi hiau-hiông, kiò &#x002D;&#x002D;nâng⁎ thuân-tàⁿ-: "Uá tsuan-tsuan kah lṳ́ jiá tsha̍t-kiáⁿ khioh-chhiû, &#x002D;&#x002D;che̍k-jît nán tng-thâu-tùi-mīn thóiⁿ-su-iâⁿ." A-ngiâu siŏⁿ-tio̍h⁎ Lí-hṳ̂-chē buē-chêng siu sì-tît, hiá sèⁿ-thâu chèng₊-kuà chhiáⁿ-teh &#x002D;&#x002D;lo̍h-khṳ̀.
+<!-- 注：原文为 “十八乡”，为以今度古，暂且不按。 -->
 
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