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Docs: update readme, add docs/readme, modernize a bit #2341

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@ebidel ebidel commented May 23, 2017

  • Updates screenshots
  • moves main readme examples to docs/readme.md
  • adds a "turn on logging" example to the node snippet
  • Beefs up the custom audit recipe and removes dupe content from the readme
  • Adds info on DevTools integration
  • Adds recipe/doc links to main readme

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> Helpful for CI integration

- [gulp](docs/recipes/gulp)

## Viewing a report

Lighthouse can produce a report as JSON, HTML, or stdout CLI output.
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no more stdout CLI. :)

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good catch. done

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## Develop

Also see [Contributing](./CONTRIBUTING.md) for more information.
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Read on for the basics of hacking on Lighthouse. Also see...

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done

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Useful documentation, examples, and [recipes](./recipes/) to get you started.
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kinda think this should be overview.md or basics.md.

This kinda forces the user to choose a markdown file when entering /docs but i think that's good. it also means we don't have to maintain this file as a table-of-contents of all our docs

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I used readme.md for that reason :)...so people would see some of the most common examples when they hit /docs. It's not really a table of contents though. [recipes](./recipes/) will give them the list of directories/md files. /readme.md has a manual list so folks can search the main repo page and find drilled in content.

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well... im okay with it being readme. but let's add one more link to architecture.md at the top or so.

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These changes look great. Nice stuff. :)

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Useful documentation, examples, and [recipes](./recipes/) to get you started.
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well... im okay with it being readme. but let's add one more link to architecture.md at the top or so.

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a-ok by me, the readme was a bit of a monster :)

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To use Lighthouse from within the DevTools, open the tools, select the Audits panel,
and hit "Perform an Audit...".

<img width="350px" alt="Lighthouse integration in CHrome DevTools" src="https://cloud.githubusercontent.com/assets/238208/26366636/ada298f8-3fa0-11e7-9da5-ede2c906d10c.png">
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nit: s/CHrome/Chrome/ :)

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done

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done

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lots of little things


function launchChromeAndRunLighthouse(url, flags, config = null) {
return chromeLauncher.launch().then(chrome => {
flags.port = chrome.port;
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port ends up a distracting detail in basic usage. maybe we shouldn't have done a random port by default.. :)

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i think it's worth it. but if you wanna discuss, let's open an issue?

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I don't know how much it actually hurts things or how much the gains matter, so not sure if it's worth opening an issue :)

It's just when I see examples like this it seems like one more requirement to remember without any advantages for basic usage

const log = require('lighthouse/lighthouse-core/lib/log');

const flags = {logLevel: 'info', output: 'json'};
log.setLevel(flags.logLevel);
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log.setLevel(flags.logLevel); shouldn't need to be done by a user since the LH module does this based on flags.logLevel

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you need it to see the chrome launcher's output.

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you need it to see the chrome launcher's output

that seems like a chrome-launcher bug. I think we discussed removing log from there, but it should take a logLevel until/if it gets removed

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## Testing on a site with authentication

Lighthouse adds `chrome-debug` to the CLI when you install it from npm.
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npm/yarn?

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When installed globally via npm install -g or yarn global add, a chrome-debug binary is added, which will launch a standalone Chrome instance with a debugging port open.

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done

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// Usage:
launchChromeAndRunLighthouse('https://example.com', flags)
.then(results => console.log(results));
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I personally prefer your previous comment version of this (// Use results or whatever) rather than just console.logging it

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done

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## Lighthouse as trace processor

Lighthouse can be used to analyze trace and performance data collected from other tools (like WebPageTest and ChromeDriver). The `traces` and `devtoolsLogs` artifact items can be provided using a string for the absolute path on disk. The `devtoolsLogs` array is captured from the Network domain (a la ChromeDriver's [`enableNetwork` option](https://sites.google.com/a/chromium.org/chromedriver/capabilities#TOC-perfLoggingPrefs-object)) and reformatted slightly. As an example, here's a trace-only run that's reporting on user timings and critical request chains:
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devtoolsLogs is Page and Network now (though to be fair, this will continue to be weird to use until we get GAR)

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So what are are the updates?

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The devtoolsLogs array is captured from the Network domain

to

The devtoolsLogs array is captured from the Network and Page domains (a la ChromeDriver's [enableNetwork and enablePage options]

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# cd lighthouse-cli && yarn dev
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does chrome-launcher need a tsc note too?

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done

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Useful documentation, examples, and recipes to get you started.

**Docs**
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should this be moved higher? Not as useful for first time visitors, but useful for repeat visitors. At least, when I need to get to a particular set of instructions I usually go to a project's readme and hope that it's linked to from there. Don't know what other people do :)

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## Related Projects

* [webpack-lighthouse-plugin](https://github.com/addyosmani/webpack-lighthouse-plugin) - run Lighthouse from a Webpack build.
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irregular spacing here and below?

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we should fix up the wording on these, too. "gather" vs "gathers", active vs passive, etc

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* [lighthouse-mocha-example](https://github.com/justinribeiro/lighthouse-mocha-example) - gathers performance metrics via Lighthouse and tests them in Mocha
* [pwmetrics](https://github.com/paulirish/pwmetrics/) - gather performance metrics
* [lighthouse-hue](https://github.com/ebidel/lighthouse-hue) - Lighthouse score setting the color of Philips Hue lights
* [lighthouse-batch](https://www.npmjs.com/package/lighthouse-batch) - Run Lighthouse over a number of sites in sequence and generating a summary report including all of their scores.
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generating -> generate? Or Runs/generates. Depends on how the others end up

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Our session from Google I/O 2017: architecture, writing custom audits, Github/Travis/CI integration, and more:
> **Tip**: see [Lighthouse Architecture](./docs/architecture.md) more information
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"see Lighthouse Architecture for information on terminology and architecture"?

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## Tests
### Tests

Some basic unit tests forked are in `/test` and run via mocha. eslint is also checked for style violations.
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this sentence has morphed into something that makes no sense (and the "basic unit tests" doesn't apply anymore...lots of unit tests plus smoke tests now)

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done


A hypothetical site measures the time from navigation start to when the page has initialized and the main search box is ready to be used. It saves that value in a global variable, `window.myLoadMetrics.searchableTime`.
> **Tip**: see [Lighthouse Architecture](../../../docs/architecture.md) information
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for information

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Our session from Google I/O 2017: architecture, writing custom audits, Github/Travis/CI integration, and more:
> **Tip**: see [Lighthouse Architecture](./docs/architecture.md) more information
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also needs for

output into the Lighthouse report. This example extends [Lighthouse's
default configuration](https://github.com/GoogleChrome/lighthouse/blob/master/lighthouse-core/config/default.js).

**Note**: when extending default.js, passes with the same name are merged together,
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filename might be obscure. Maybe "when extending the default config"?

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Those last comments, but otherwise looks good! Big improvement

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* [webpack-lighthouse-plugin](https://github.com/addyosmani/webpack-lighthouse-plugin) - run Lighthouse from a Webpack build.
* [lighthouse-mocha-example](https://github.com/justinribeiro/lighthouse-mocha-example) - gather performance metrics via Lighthouse and tests them in Mocha
* [pwmetrics](https://github.com/paulirish/pwmetrics/) - gather performance metrics
* [lighthouse-hue](https://github.com/ebidel/lighthouse-hue) - uses a Lighthouse score to set the color of Philips Hue lights
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s/uses/use to match the other descriptions

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* [pwmetrics](https://github.com/paulirish/pwmetrics/) - gather performance metrics
* [lighthouse-hue](https://github.com/ebidel/lighthouse-hue) - uses a Lighthouse score to set the color of Philips Hue lights
* [lighthouse-batch](https://www.npmjs.com/package/lighthouse-batch) - run Lighthouse over a number of sites and generate a summary of their metrics/scores.
* [lighthouse-cron](https://github.com/thearegee/lighthouse-cron) - Cron multiple batch Lighthouse audits and emit results for sending to remote server.
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the start of this is hard to parse, but that's what was submitted so we can leave as is for now :)

@ebidel ebidel merged commit fb86d50 into master May 24, 2017
@ebidel ebidel deleted the docs branch May 24, 2017 00:29
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