Made changes to some dialogue

TravellingStickSalesman_ProjectFolder/Assets/Scenes/MerchantCapital.unity

@@ -3147,8 +3147,8 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   sentences:
   - "Oh\u2026 Merchan-TREE\u2026 How did I not make that connection?"
   - "Hey, how you doin\u2019? One moment, let me just put these things down."
-  - "There we go! Now, what can I help you w... Well, if it isn\u2019t Genevieve\u2019s
-    apprentice! Or should I say, former apprentice."
+  - "There we go! Now, what can I help you w\u2014well, if it isn\u2019t Genevieve\u2019s
+    apprentice! Or should I say, former apprentice. Ha!"
   - 'Wow, the last time I saw you, you were at least an average sized stick shorter! '
   - "Gen said you\u2019d be dropping off the new sticks. It\u2019s about time! "
   - "Now, let\u2019s see what you\u2019ve brought me. "

TravellingStickSalesman_ProjectFolder/Assets/Scenes/MushroomPuzzle.unity

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@@ -3739,9 +3739,9 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   - 'Just a hunch. Not many folks end up here on purpose, you see.  '
   - "Well, pleased to meet you. I\u2019m Beardfac\xE9. That\u2019s Beard-fah-say.
     Don\u2019t be calling me Beardface!"
-  - "\u2026What am I doing here, you ask? "
-  - "Well, that is a fair query! I certainly don\u2019t live here, if that\u2019s
-    what you were wondering. "
+  - "\u2026Ah, what am I doing here, you ask?"
+  - "Ah, that is a fair query! I certainly don\u2019t live here, if that\u2019s what
+    you were wondering. "
   - "No, no\u2026 I suppose you could say I\u2019m doing\u2026 research... "
   - See now, this cave has cultural significance to my people. See those runes on
     the wall there?
@@ -3756,12 +3756,12 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   - 'Well, braid my beard! That was exactly it!  '
   - "There\u2019s magic in these runes, make no mistake! I\u2019m very impressed,
     young one.  "
-  - "Of all the caves you happen to get lost in, I\u2019m glad it was this one. My
-    ancestors have you to thank.  "
+  - "Of all the caves you happened to get lost in, I\u2019m glad it was this one.
+    My ancestors have you to thank.  "
   - "Say, do you need help getting un-lost? Then I\u2019ll gladly point you to your
     destination. "
   - ' '
-  - 'Ah! I might have guessed you were a Stick Merchant. You are after all renowned
+  - 'Ah! I might have guessed you were a Stick Merchant. You are, after all, renowned
     for your talent with puzzles. '
   - "Well, you should be on your way, but if you ever need a friend, you can always
     rely on old Beardface \u2013 I mean Beardfac\xE9! "

TravellingStickSalesman_ProjectFolder/Assets/Scenes/PotionPuzzle.unity

@@ -4738,7 +4738,7 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   emptyText: "Hey, that\u2019s empty!"
   incorrectText: "Hmm\u2026 Something isn\u2019t right. Let\u2019s try another combination.  "
   notEnoughText: "Ah\u2026 Something\u2019s missing here. We may need more ingredients\u2026"
-  tooManyText: Oh! That might actually be too many. You mind taking a few back?
+  tooManyText: Oh, haha! That might actually be too many. You mind taking a few back?
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@@ -5565,23 +5565,24 @@ MonoBehaviour:
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   sentences:
   - "Yes?! Everything\u2019s fine! Oh geez, sorry. I thought you were someone else
-    for a moment..."
+    for a moment... Phew."
   - "No, no, it\u2019s\u2026 it\u2019s okay! I, uh, messed up earlier, so I\u2019m
     a little on edge right now. "
   - "Nothing too bad, really! Just knocked a valuable client\u2019s potion over...
     Spilled it everywhere."
   - "And my master\u2019s the only one who knows the recipe. He's not in right now
     and the client\u2019s due any moment."
   - "Alright, maybe it's a little bit bad. Um, but... Don\u2019t worry! I can handle
-    this, I think. Sorry to dump all of that on you!"
+    this, I\u2014I think. Sorry to dump all of that on you! Haha... heh."
   - So, uh, welcome to the potion shop! My name is Quercus. Is there anything I can
     do for you?
   - "Oh, you\u2019re going to the Merchant Capital? No problem! I can show you the
-    way, no problem. It\u2019s, um\u2026 it\u2019s, uhh\u2026 Oh, darn it."
-  - "I\u2019m really sorry, but I\u2019m just so frazzled that I can\u2019t think
-    of anything but potions right now!"
+    way, no problem. It\u2019s, um\u2026 it\u2019s\u2014it's, uhh\u2026 Oh, darn
+    it."
+  - "I\u2019m really sorry, but I'm\u2014I\u2019m just so frazzled that I can\u2019t
+    think of anything but potions right now!"
   - Say, I have an idea. Do you think you could give me a hand with this recipe?
-  - "Oh... Once the potion\u2019s all fixed up I\u2019m sure I\u2019ll be able to
+  - "Oh... Once the potion\u2019s all fixed up, I\u2019m sure I\u2019ll be able to
     give you directions!"
   - "And I know we\u2019ll be able to figure this out in no time with the two of
     us working together. It\u2019s the perfect plan!"
@@ -5590,13 +5591,13 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   - "And don\u2019t worry about the order or anything; it\u2019s all about using
     the right stuff. So, all we have to do is figure out which ones to use!"
   - "Let\u2019s try some combinations and see how it looks, okay? I\u2019ll let you
-    know if it looks familiar"
+    know if it looks familiar."
   - 
   - "Eureka! That\u2019s it! That\u2019s exactly it!"
-  - "The viscosity, the smell, the colour\u2026 It\u2019s all perfect! This is the
-    perfect potion! "
+  - "Ah, the viscosity, the smell, the colour\u2026 It\u2019s all perfect! This is
+    the perfect potion! "
   - "Phew\u2026 That\u2019s a huge weight off my shoulders. Being an apprentice is
-    really stressful sometimes!"
+    really stressful sometimes! Haha!"
   - 'Well, with all that sorted, my head feels a lot clearer! Here, let me show you
     the way. '
   - ' '

TravellingStickSalesman_ProjectFolder/Assets/Scenes/SeaPuzzle.unity

@@ -1893,12 +1893,12 @@ MonoBehaviour:
     bein\u2019 a shark\u2019n all."
   - "I really hate to bother you like this, but I\u2019m actually in a bit of trouble. "
   - "See, my anniversary\u2019s coming up, and I want to get my husband something."
-  - This beach is famous for its colorful pearls, so I thought I might try and make
-    him a necklace from some of them, you know.
+  - This beach is famous for its colourful pearls, so I thought I might try and make
+    him a necklace from some of them, you know?
   - But, uh. The problem with that is these shells are real picky about giving away
     their pearls.
-  - "Well, for a start, you have to have a good memory! And, uh\u2026 color vision.
-    I don\u2019t have that, mate."
+  - "Well, for a start, you have to have a good memory! And, uh\u2026 colour vision.
+    Haha. I don\u2019t have that, mate."
   - "So what I\u2019m asking is, could you do me a huge favor and help me gather
     up some pearls? l promise I'll make it worth your time!"
   - 
@@ -1909,13 +1909,13 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   - "Wait\u2026 Hold on, now. The Merchant Capital? Are you Genevieve\u2019s apprentice? "
   - "Aw mate, you shoulda told me sooner! I would\u2019ve sent ya there straight
     away if I\u2019d\u2019ve known."
-  - "Righto, so... the fastest way to Kaede\u2019s garden is uh\u2026 Actually, lands
-    not really my forte, mate. I\u2019ll show you on your map."
+  - "Righto, so... the fastest way to Kaede\u2019s garden is uh\u2026 Uh, Actually,
+    land's not really my forte, mate. I\u2019ll show you on your map."
   - ' '
-  - "Now, a lotta people get lost there. It\u2019s a big forest, lots of confusing
-    currents, all that."
+  - "Now, a lotta people get lost there. It\u2019s a big forest, lots of confusion
+    currents\u2019n all that."
   - "But Kaede\u2019s a smart kid. She knows the roads like the back of her hand;
-    just make sure she leads you and you\u2019ll be right, mate!"
+    just make sure she leads you, and you\u2019ll be right, mate!"
   - "Righto, I\u2019d better get to it. I wouldn\u2019t mind if you wanted to talk
     more, though. I\u2019d love the company."
   - "And, hey, you\u2019re a merchant, right? Got anything a fish might like?"

TravellingStickSalesman_ProjectFolder/Assets/Scenes/ShrinePuzzle.unity

@@ -3035,8 +3035,8 @@ MonoBehaviour:
   - "\u2026Or perhaps you did not come here merely to rest?"
   - In that case, follow me, dear wanderer, and allow me to show you the correct
     way through these winding roads.
-  - "Um... Please excuse me for a moment... I think I have to rotate it this way,
-    and ah\u2026 the other way? Huh\u2026 That\u2019s wrong."
+  - "Please excuse me for a moment\u2026 Hm, I think I have to rotate it this way,
+    and ah\u2026 mm, the other way? Huh\u2026 That\u2019s wrong."
   - "I am so very sorry. It seems I have, um\u2026 forgotten the password."
   - "You see, there\u2019s a path right past this stone that leads towards the Merchant
     Capital."
@@ -3046,8 +3046,8 @@ MonoBehaviour:
     the stone will let you through.
   - "But I must be out of practice\u2026 I\u2019ve completely forgotten what it\u2019s
     supposed to look like."
-  - "This is so embarrassing! You wouldn\u2019t happen to be any good at this sort
-    of thing, would you?"
+  - "Ooh, this is so embarrassing! You wouldn\u2019t happen to be any good at this
+    sort of thing, would you?"
   - 
   - "Oh! Oh, that was it! That\u2019s the symbol!"
   - Yes, perfect! This is my chance to get a proper look and memorize it.