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Your project looks very aesthetically pleasing! I really like the spacing and layout of the text and the cool font you used for “Well it doesn’t exist here!” and “Adopt crypto today”. I also noticed that the background color becomes lighter in the middle of the image to draw attention, that was a really good touch. The first things I see are the “inflation” text and the coin. I think the main point is to advocate people to advocate the purchasing and use of cryptocurrency. It looks like your project meets the baseline criteria.
One suggestion that comes to mind is to modify the text of “Created by Conor Dwyer from the Noun Project”, because it is quite small and dark, which makes it hard to see against the black background.
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This visual argument is one arguing for the use and adoption of crypto. It is a very clear argument. The contrast between the background and text is nice but I do think there is too much empty space. The way inflation gets larger is very nice. The gradient in the background is also pleasing to look at. I think this does meet all the baseline criteria but the potential to go above that is very evident. One suggestion I would have is to put different symbols of crypto such as bitcoin or Ethereum and show how they have grown and gotten better. I would also add another color such as green because it is a color associated with wealth and money. Overall though its a very good draft for the visual argument and I can't wait to see what it turns into.
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I really liked the presentation of your argument. The spacing and different fonts meshed well and looked pretty cool overall. There is clear contrast, but it's not super intense. I think that you meet all the baseline criteria, but I think that you can make little detail changes to make it more polished. As a suggestion maybe adding a plash of a brighter color?