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Add a variant of the text Gorry proposed #145
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Thanks, Lars. Looks good to me, FWIW. I noticed one typo, which I commented on in-line.
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Thanks!
draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc8312bis.md
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Also, the wide deployment of CUBIC on the Internet was driven by | ||
direct adoption in most of the popular operating systems, and did not | ||
follow the practices documented in {{!RFC5033}}. However, due to the | ||
resulting extremely widespread deployment experience over a long |
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I'd suggest removing /extremely/ ... it might be true that this is extreme, but all that matters is the widespread deployment experience.
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How about "Internet-scale" instead of "extremely widespread"?
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I think this text captures what I hoped for. With the suggestion to remove /extremely/, I think this text is ready.
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tcpm/eb-9QEI0Srfr_D5Pb_dCqFhZrxY/