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[joss-review] Feedback on paper #25

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zonca opened this issue Apr 24, 2024 · 4 comments
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[joss-review] Feedback on paper #25

zonca opened this issue Apr 24, 2024 · 4 comments

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zonca commented Apr 24, 2024

Statement of need

  • Please explain where the 21-cm emission comes from
  • Gyr is too technical for the statement of need

Summary

Just a bit more details on the process

  • it would be useful to specify what parameters of an instrument you can characterize
  • also specify what is the format of the input data, are those timelines of some sort?
  • do you generally run this full-sky or works in patches?
  • do you use any other inputs besides instrument parameters and instrument data?

Figure 1

Explain terminology

  • phi
  • k
  • $\Delta K$
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zonca commented Apr 24, 2024

also "Do the authors describe how this software compares to other commonly-used packages?", aren't there other codes doing something similar?

jburba added a commit that referenced this issue May 7, 2024
- Added a sentence where the 21-cm emission comes from
- Replaced "Gyr" with billion years
- Added a paragraph to the summery specifying the components of the instrument model, the form of the input data (with an added citation to pyuvdata), and some examples of analysis parameters
- Updated the figure caption to define the symbols in the subplot labels (\Delta^2(k), k, and \varphi)
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jburba commented May 10, 2024

Hi @zonca , I think I've addressed your suggestions. Please give the most recent version of the paper a read and let me know what you think. I've also updated the documentation to include some more information about the inputs and more detail on running the analysis.

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zonca commented May 10, 2024

text is good, can you explain the terminology in the figure? best would be to add a caption.

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jburba commented May 13, 2024

The figure caption only seems to appear in the pdf, not the markdown file. I'm not sure why that is.

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