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Various fixes #512

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9 changes: 4 additions & 5 deletions en-US/Design.xml
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<title>Capitalization</title>
<para>
The standard for all Red&nbsp;Hat technical documentation is title case for all headings and titles.
Table headings, procedure headings, and formal paragraph titles fall under this heading; standard title case capitalization rules apply.
Table headings and procedure headings fall under this heading; standard title case capitalization rules apply.
</para>
</formalpara>
<para>
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</programlisting>

<para>
For example, <citetitle>Maximum RPM</citetitle> by
<author>
For example, <citetitle>Maximum RPM</citetitle> by Edward Bailey; Red&nbsp;Hat Press.
<!-- <author>
<firstname>Edward</firstname>
<surname>Bailey</surname>

</author>
; Red&nbsp;Hat Press.
</author> -->
</para>
<formalpara id="other-websites">
<title>Referencing Other Internet Sites</title>
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4 changes: 2 additions & 2 deletions en-US/Grammar.xml
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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
If the restatement contains the word <emphasis>he</emphasis>, <emphasis>she</emphasis>, <emphasis>they</emphasis>, I<emphasis>I</emphasis>, or <emphasis>we</emphasis>, then use <emphasis>who</emphasis> or <emphasis>whoever</emphasis>. "Do you think he would mind?" "Who do you think would mind?" "She's walking in the door." "Who's walking in the door?"
If the restatement contains the word <emphasis>he</emphasis>, <emphasis>she</emphasis>, <emphasis>they</emphasis>, <emphasis>I</emphasis>, or <emphasis>we</emphasis>, then use <emphasis>who</emphasis> or <emphasis>whoever</emphasis>. "Do you think he would mind?" "Who do you think would mind?" "She's walking in the door." "Who's walking in the door?"
</para>

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<title>Sentence Length</title>
<para>
Try not to pack too much information into one sentence.
In technical documentation, try not to exceed 30 words in a sentence.
In technical documentation, try not to exceed 40 words in a sentence.
Keep it short.
The following sentence is a bad writing example:
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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion en-US/Language.xml
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<term>shoot yourself in the foot</term>
<listitem>
<para>
To "shoot yourself in the foot" indicates that you did something to harm your own cause, or acting against your own best interests. Remove the sentence; it should be self-evident from the surrounding information. (Found this statement alongside the "double-edged sword" comment with an added note about "preserving all your toes".)
To "shoot yourself in the foot" indicates that you did something to harm your own cause, or acting against your own best interests. Remove the sentence; it should be self-evident from the surrounding information.
</para>

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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion en-US/P.xml
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<warning>
<title>Marketing, Brand, Customer Portal Usage</title>
<para>
For all-caps text, such as banners, use "&lt;VARIANT&gt;-ASERVICE" for the spelled-out version. The same abbreviation is used across all groups.
For all-caps text, such as banners, use "&lt;VARIANT&gt;-AS-A-SERVICE" for the spelled-out version. The same abbreviation is used across all groups.
</para>

</warning>
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18 changes: 0 additions & 18 deletions en-US/Translation.xml
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<para>
To obtain the file name of the default kernel with the <command>grubby</command> command:
</para>
<para>
...
</para>

</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
Finding the index number of the default kernel:
</para>
<para>
...
</para>

</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
Use the <command>grubby</command> command to persistently change the default kernel:
</para>
<para>
...
</para>

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<para>
Obtain the file name of the default kernel with the <command>grubby</command> command:
</para>
<para>
...
</para>

</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
Find the index number of the default kernel:
</para>
<para>
...
</para>

</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
Use the <command>grubby</command> command to persistently change the default kernel:
</para>
<para>
...
</para>

</listitem>

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