wonder and colony

[TheShadowOfHassen]

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[TheShadowOfHassen]

Is this OK to merge?

[indoptogopt]

To be honest, the colony text lacks some depth (and length). I'd recommend to check out the articles I linked to in the forum thread.

[TheShadowOfHassen]

I added a bit more information, but those articles basically say what I did, just longer.

[indoptogopt]

More or less, yes. But you could talk a bit more about the military value of these colonies. Maybe: When and how were they called up? How many and how important were the settlers for the army?

[TheShadowOfHassen]

I have not been able to find that information, honestly I know they were historically called military colonies but all the information I've seen haven't really explained why. I added a bit more detail on what the Greeks did, but I think it'll have to be good the way it is,

[indoptogopt]

I'd change up one of the two "serving as"s.

[indoptogopt]

Ptolemaic and Seleucid military colonies were essentially the same. But it's ok. You can merge it now. There's really not a lot to say about this topic.

[TheShadowOfHassen]

Replaced one of the serving as. Thanks for the feedback, stuff like that is useful to keep in mind