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 ## Location
 
-Please note: Warwick University is in **Coventry, not the town of Warwick!**
+**Please note: Warwick University is in Coventry, not the town of Warwick!**
 
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 ### Arriving by Rail
 
-Coventry Railway Station is well-connected to Birmingham and London. There are frequent trains from Birmingham New Street that take ~20 minutes.
+Coventry Railway Station is well-connected to Birmingham and London. There are frequent trains from Birmingham New Street that take ~20 minutes. In addition, it may be more convenient to travel to Canley Rail Station which is also in walking distance of the University.
 
 ### Buses 
 Coventry Railway Station has frequent buses to campus through the express 12X or the slower 11 (both operated by National Express). These can be caught from the [Rail Station Bridge stop](https://goo.gl/maps/YAqPpQXVXqzpKPz76), just outside the station (try to leave through the new bit). Alternatively, the 11 also stops at [Station Interchange](https://goo.gl/maps/Lu3GGVELEek24b7f8), through the underpass tunnel.
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 ### Arriving by Car
 
-Warwick University is on the south-western edge of Coventry (Postcode: CV4 7AL). There is lots of parking available on campus, although not all of it is publicly accessible. See [this map](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/carparks/where/where_can_i_park_-Jan_2022v2.pdf) and [this website](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/carparks/) for up-to-date information. The car parking rules on campus can be a bit tricky, so be careful.
+Warwick University is on the south-western edge of **Coventry** (Postcode: CV4 7AL). There is lots of parking available on campus, although not all of it is publicly accessible. See [this map](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/carparks/where/where_can_i_park_-Jan_2022v2.pdf) and [this website](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/carparks/) for up-to-date information. The car parking rules on campus can be a bit tricky, so please be careful.
 
 ### Getting Around Campus
 
-Campus is walkable and fully wheelchair accessible. The SU Atrium (where we’ll be) is in central campus and two mins from the Bus Interchange. When navigating around campus, the [Interactive Campus Map](https://campus.warwick.ac.uk/search/623c8897421e6f5928c0d2e2) can be useful.
+Campus is walkable and fully wheelchair accessible. The SU Atrium (where we’ll be) is on central campus and two minutes from the Bus Interchange. When navigating around campus, the [Interactive Campus Map](https://campus.warwick.ac.uk/search/623c8897421e6f5928c0d2e2) can be useful.
 
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 [Premier Inn Earlsdon Park](https://www.premierinn.com/gb/en/hotels/england/west-midlands/coventry/coventry-city-centre-earlsdon-park.html) or [Premier Inn Belgrade Plaza](https://www.premierinn.com/gb/en/hotels/england/west-midlands/coventry/coventry-city-centre-belgrade-plaza.html) Slightly out the centre, fairly well-connected.
 
-[Britannia Hotel Coventry](https://www.britanniahotels.com/hotels/the-britannia-hotel-coventry) On the far end of the city, though well served from Poole Meadow Bus Station. Likely the cheapest, but probably for a reason.
+[Britannia Hotel Coventry](https://www.britanniahotels.com/hotels/the-britannia-hotel-coventry) On the far end of the city, though well served from Poole Meadow Bus Station. Likely the cheapest.
 
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 We would generally then recommend hotels around the city centre, as they are much better connected to the university than some places geographically closer by. However, if you want to be closer (or drive), we have some options:
 
-[Warwick Conferences: Scarman or Radcliffe](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/conferences/bed-and-breakfast/) Actually on campus so very convenient, but at a bit of a premium.
+[Warwick Conferences: Scarman or Radcliffe](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/conferences/bed-and-breakfast/) On campus, but at a premium.
 
-[Premier Inn Coventry South](https://www.premierinn.com/gb/en/hotels/england/west-midlands/coventry/coventry-south-a45.html) Despite being geographically closer to the university, it is poorly served by buses.
+[Premier Inn Coventry South](https://www.premierinn.com/gb/en/hotels/england/west-midlands/coventry/coventry-south-a45.html) Despite being geographically closer to the university, the buses can be unreliable.
 
-[Village Hotel Coventry](https://www.village-hotels.co.uk/coventry) Placed on the 11’s route, but isn’t close to anything really.
+[Village Hotel Coventry](https://www.village-hotels.co.uk/coventry) Placed on the 11’s route, but doesn't have much around.
 
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 Warwick campus hosts a range of places to eat and buy food, owned either by the [SU](https://www.warwicksu.com/venues-events/eating-drinking/) or [University](https://warwick.ac.uk/services/retail/openingtimes/) itself. Check these links for a full list.
 
-**In & around the SU**: Curiositea (cafe), Dirty Duck (pub), Pret A Manger, Rootes Grocery Store.  
-**On Campus**: Benugo (Arts Centre, fancy), Cafe Nero, Bar Fusion.  
+**In & around the SU**: Curiositea (cafe), Dirty Duck (pub), Pret A Manger, Rootes Grocery Store, Jidong (bubble tea).
+**On Campus**: Benugo (Arts Centre, fancy), Cafe Nero, Bar Fusion (Also close to our Esports Centre!).
 
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-**Cannon Park** (~15mins walk): Greggs, Subway, Costa, Tesco, ALDI, Street food vans. Furthest away, but largest variety.  
-**Leamington & Coventry** Have a whole bunch of nice food but require a bus ride to get to.
+**Cannon Park** (~15mins walk): Greggs, Subway, Costa, Tesco, ALDI, Street food vans. Furthest away, but largest variety. There is also a nice pub called The Phantom Coach which is a little past Cannon Park.  
+**Leamington & Coventry** Have plenty of other places to get food but may require a short bus ride to reach.
 
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guide/info.md

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 Donation incentives can be almost anything:
 
-- an upgrade to the run: "do x bonus level", "enable hard mode", or "collect a bonus collectible"
+- An upgrade to the run: "do x bonus level", "enable hard mode", or "collect a bonus collectible"
 - A bid war over a basic choice: "which character to play with?", "clothing choice"
 - Trigger an event: "will do x for every donation" (towards that incentive)
 - Something silly (e.g. install a funny cosmetic mod or pet a dog in the game)
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guide/setup.md

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-We will be in Warwick Students' Union Atrium, which is a great venue for us.
+WASD 2024 will be in Warwick University's Students' Union Atrium, which is a great venue for us.
 
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 [Warwick Computing Society](https://uwcs.co.uk/) have a variety of consoles they are able to provide:
 
-- XBox One & 360
+- Xbox One & 360
 - Nintendo: Switch, Wii U, Wii, and GameCube
 - PS4
 
-If you require any of these for your run, ensure to mention this them beforehand.
+If you require any of these for your run, please mention this beforehand.
 
 If you are bringing your own console, laptop, or PC then we will be using an HDMI capture card to record your device’s output. For modern devices, this is straight forward, but older devices may need an adapter.
 
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 We’ll be using our own RTMP server to receive your game stream. Please make sure this is a clean feed, with *only* the game video and audio. We’ll be using [VDO.Ninja](https://vdo.ninja/) to capture your webcam and microphone. We will send you a personal link to both of these to connect to ~15 minutes before your scheduled time. We recommend OBS to capture the game, either from your screen or a capture card from a console, and stream to our RTMP server.
 
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