Revamp rules

src/pages/ServerRules.js

@@ -8,61 +8,72 @@ class ServerRules extends Component {
 					<div>
 						<h1>Server Rules</h1>
 						<span className='bold'>
-							This page was last updated on October 27th, 2019 (minor
-							grammatical edits).
+							This page was last updated on November 4th, 2019 (revamped).
 						</span>
 						<p>
-							Failure to follow any of the rules listed on this page may result
-							in a punishment on your Minecraft or Discord account. If you have
-							any questions about a rule, please contact a staff member on our
-							Discord server for more information.
+							Failure to abide by any of the rules listed on this page may result 
+							in punishment for your Minecraft or Discord account. If you have any questions 
+							about a rule, please contact a staff member on our Discord server for more
+							information. 
 						</p>
 					</div>
 					<hr />
 					<div>
 						<h2>General Composure</h2>
 						<ol>
 							<li>
-								Maintain a casual and positive atmosphere at all times. Be
-								respectful of all players. Harassment and bullying are strictly
-								not allowed.
+								Ensure that you are respectful to all players and are
+								maintaining a calm and positive atmosphere while on our server.
+								Any forms of harassment or bullying are strictly forbidden.
 							</li>
-							<li>
-								Be kind to other players. While we're pretty lenient when it
-								comes to swearing, we ask that you do not use foul language
-								towards other players.
+							<li> 
+								Toxic behavior such as acting negatively towards others, being a bad sportsman,
+								and disrespecting others is not allowed. We aim to provide all players with a safe and relaxed 
+								environment; Warzone has no room for toxicity.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								No advertising of any kind. This includes Minehut servers,
-								external servers, YouTube channels, Discord servers, etc.
+								Do not leak personal information. Sharing someone's IP address, phone number
+								or other commonly hidden information will result in a blacklist. 
+								Your access to our Discord server and Minecraft server will be permanently taken away. 
+							<li>
+								Be aware that others may find excessive profanity repulsive and
+								disrespectful. While we're lenient when it comes to swearing, we
+								ask that you do not direct profanity towards other players.
+							</li>
+								Advertising is not allowed. This includes Minehut servers,
+								external Minecraft servers, YouTube channels, and Discord
+								servers.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								This is not a market. To protect our users from scams and other
-								financial offenses, selling, soliciting, and/or buying anything
-								through our services is not allowed.
+								Keep in mind that this is not a market. In order to protect our
+								players from scamming and other financial offenses, selling,
+								soliciting, and/or buying anything through our services is not
+								allowed.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Chat spamming/flooding is not allowed. Additionally, keep
-								everything as appropriate as you can.
+								Discrimination of any kind will not be tolerated.
+							<li>
+								The use of excessive capitalization, flooding chat with characters, 
+								and spamming are all punishable offenses.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Any client modifications that may give you an advantage over
-								other users while in game is not permitted. Mods such as 5zig,
-								Labymod, Optifine, or any other similar mod which doesn't give
-								yourself a major advantage over others but may affect your
-								client visually is allowed.
+								Client modifications that give you an unfair advantage over
+								other players are not permitted. Unofficial clients (like Badlion Client) 
+								are "use at your own risk". Mods that affect your
+								client visually are allowed (e.g. OptiFine, 5zig, LabyMod).
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Be respectful to staff members. If they say something, you must
-								listen and abide.
+								We ask that you are respectful towards members of the staff
+								team, as you would a normal player. Make sure to abide by the
+								instructions they give you.
 							</li>
 							<li>
 								Do not encourage other players to break rules. If a player
-								breaks a rule in response to your directions, you will be held
-								accountable.
+								breaks a rule in response to your directions, you may also be
+								held accountable.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Do not impersonate staff members on any service by rank,
+								Do not impersonate staff members on any platform by rank,
 								association, or username.
 							</li>
 							<li>
@@ -71,8 +82,8 @@ class ServerRules extends Component {
 							</li>
 							<li>
 								Directed threats towards players or the server are not
-								permitted. This includes (D)DoS threats, Dox threats, death
-								threats, or other personal threats.
+								permitted. This includes (D)DoS Threats, Dox threats, Death
+								threats or other personal threats.
 							</li>
 						</ol>
 					</div>
@@ -83,22 +94,20 @@ class ServerRules extends Component {
 							<li>
 								Do not try to harm your team. This includes game throwing
 								(intentionally losing a game) and team griefing (i.e. breaking
-								blocks under teammates, stealing from chests, blowing up your
-								own side and preventing your team from achieving objectives).
+								blocks under teammates, stealing from chests, destroying your
+								team's side and preventing your team from achieving objectives).
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Map/stats abuse such as grinding alt accounts, spawn killing,
-								leaving the game right before getting killed, switching teams
-								right before you lose, and anything similar that may positively
-								affect your stats above other players on the server is not
-								allowed.
+								Map/stats abuse such as grinding alt accounts, spawn killing, leaving the game right before 
+								getting killed, switching teams right before you lose, and anything similar that may positively 
+								affect your stats above other players on the server are not allowed.
 							</li>
 							<li>
 								Macros, autoclickers, multiple attack functions, physical
-								hardware or software modification to allow automated clicking,
+								hardware or software modifications to allow automated clicking,
 								changing standard mouse settings, modifications to standard
 								hardware limitations, etc. are not permitted. Any clicks beyond
-								one click at a time are not permitted, meaning butterfly
+								one click at a time is not permitted, meaning butterfly
 								clicking is not allowed.
 							</li>
 						</ol>
@@ -115,7 +124,7 @@ class ServerRules extends Component {
 								not allow any NSFW content on our services.
 							</li>
 							<li>
-								Use of voice changers/soundboards is not allowed. Additionally,
+								The use of voice changers and soundboards is not allowed. Additionally,
 								turn on push to talk when necessary for consideration of other
 								players.
 							</li>
@@ -137,14 +146,13 @@ class ServerRules extends Component {
 					<div>
 						If you wish to{' '}
 						<span className='underline'>appeal a punishment</span> or{' '}
-						<span className='underline'>report a player</span>, please post in{' '}
+						<span className='underline'>report a player</span>, please post a thread in their respective categories (appeals, reports){' '}
 						<a
-							href='https://warz.one/discord'
+							href='https://forums.minehut.com/clubs/23-warzone/'
 							className='white bold no-text-decoration'
 						>
-							our Discord server
+							on our forums
 						</a>{' '}
-						to the relevant channel.
 					</div>
 				</div>
 			</div>