fixup! Add quickstart to nav bar in LiveSync

content/livesync/quickstart.textile

@@ -24,6 +24,8 @@ h3(#step-2). Set up a database
 
 In general, LiveSync works with your own Postgres database, but for the purposes of the quickstart, this step will take you through setting up an example database with "Neon":https://neon.tech which is a serverless platform for Postgres databases.
 
+In Neon, create a new database, and make a note of the @Connection string@ in the Neon dashboard. This is the database URL your project's backend will connect to, as well as the Database Connector.
+
 h3(#step-3). Add the database credentials to env file
 
 Set up environment variables by copying them from the template:
@@ -49,9 +51,9 @@ export $(grep -s -v "^#" env.local | xargs)
 
 h3(#step-4). Configure the Postgres Integration on Ably Dashboard
 
-The Database Connector watches changes in your database table using the transactional "outbox pattern":https://docs.aws.amazon.com/prescriptive-guidance/latest/cloud-design-patterns/transactional-outbox.html and broadcasts those updates over Ably Channels. There are two ways to host the Database Connector, you can use, either the "Ably hosted":/livesync/database-connector#hosted-with-ably or "self hosted":/livesync/database-connector#self-hosted, for this quickstart we'll use the Ably hosted Database Connector. In the "Ably dashboard":https://ably.com/dashboard, choose the project you wish to use for this quickstart and open the @Integrations@ tab. Update the following options available to you:
+The Database Connector watches changes in your database table using the transactional "outbox pattern":https://docs.aws.amazon.com/prescriptive-guidance/latest/cloud-design-patterns/transactional-outbox.html and broadcasts those updates over Ably Channels. There are two ways to host the Database Connector. You can use either the Database Connector "hosted with Ably":/livesync/database-connector#hosted-with-ably or the same Database Connector but "hosted by yourself":/livesync/database-connector#self-hosted. For this quickstart we'll use the Ably hosted Database Connector. In the "Ably dashboard":https://ably.com/dashboard, choose the project you wish to use for this quickstart and open the @Integrations@ tab. Update the following options available to you:
 
-|_. Option |_. Description |_. Example |
+|_. Option |_. What to add |_. Example |
 | URL | Your Neon Postgres database full URL | postgresql://pguser:pgpass@pghost/pgdb?sslmode=require |
 | Outbox table schema | Schema for the "outbox table":/livesync/outbox-nodes-tables#schema. Use "public" for this quickstart. | public |
 | Outbox table name | Name for the "outbox table":/livesync/outbox-nodes-tables#outbox-table. In this quickstart it is "outbox" | outbox |
@@ -82,7 +84,7 @@ h3(#step-7). Try it out!
 
 Open the app "localhost:3000":http://localhost:3000 in at least two browser tabs.
 
-Navigate to a post in both tabs, then in one of the tabs try adding, editing, and removing comments from multiple tabs and see the changes reflected to all users in realtime!
+Navigate to a post in both tabs, then in one of the tabs try adding, editing, and removing comments, each update will be optimistically updated immediately for the tab making the change. Once the change is confirmed from the backend, all other tabs will be updated in realtime.
 
 h2(#breakdown). Understanding the implementation
 
@@ -100,7 +102,7 @@ Before breaking down LiveSync components within the example, the main files with
 - @prisma/migrations/@ - Creating the @nodes@, @outbox@, @user@, @post@, and @comment@ tables.
 - @prisma/seed.ts@ - Populates the database tables with seeded data for testing with.
 
-h3(#model). The model
+h3(#model). The frontend model
 
 The @model@ is a data model representation of a specific part of your frontend application. In the @livecomments@ example, the "model":https://github.com/ably-labs/live-comments/blob/main/lib/models/hook.ts#L40-L46 is a specific post, defined by its unique post ID, @post:${id}@.