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Grammar in documentation #273

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deizel opened this issue Dec 27, 2011 · 2 comments
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Grammar in documentation #273

deizel opened this issue Dec 27, 2011 · 2 comments

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@deizel
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deizel commented Dec 27, 2011

Diving into Redis for the first time and noticed some grammatical errors in the documentation. Granted the project has Italian roots (ESL), but I thought it may be worthwhile to point out a few of them so they can be improved for future readers:

http://redis.io/topics/data-types

Strings

"instance yo can" -> "instance you can" (typo)

Lists

"inserts a new element on head/tail" -> "inserts a new element on the head/tail" (common noun)
"one of this operations" -> "one of these operations" (plural)
"This is a very handy semantics" -> "These are very handy semantics" (plural)
"The main features .. is the" -> "The main features .. are the" (plural)

Sets

"adding an members" -> "adding a member" (singular) or "adding members" (plural)

Sorted sets

"where you every everything you need" -> "where you can store(?) everything you need" (mistake)
"you can do with great performances a lot of tasks" -> "you can do a lot of tasks with great performance" (ordering)
"All this fast" -> "All very fast" (how fast?)
"having as (the) score the age of the user" -> "having the score as the age of the user" or "having the age of the user as the score" (ordering)
"as (the) value the ID of the user" -> "having the value as the ID of the user" or "having the ID of the user as the value" (ditto)

Look forward to using Redis. :)

@slowernet
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Not affiliated with the team, but documentation fixes make great pull requests.

@deizel
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deizel commented Jan 2, 2012

Thanks, I found the documentation repo and have submitted a pull request instead:

redis/redis-doc#90

@deizel deizel closed this as completed Jan 2, 2012
PatKamin added a commit to PatKamin/redis that referenced this issue Oct 28, 2022
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