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README.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Send and receive bitcoins from your Android phone!
 
 Note that this app is still under development and may lose your coins!  Test it with small amounts.
 
-You can [download from the Android Market here](http://example.com/) or search for "bitcoin" from your mobile device.
+You can [download it from the Android Market here](http://example.com/) or search for "bitcoin" from your mobile device.
 
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@@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ Features
 * Scan and generate QR codes to share address, amount, etc between devices
 * Recognizes the Bitcoin [URI format](https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/URI_Scheme)
 * Creates transactions in the absence of internet (will retry when you reconnect)
-* Email bitcoin invoices from your phone to request money
-* Wallet file is backed up in the cloud (synced to your Google account) so your coins are not lost if your phone is lost of damaged.
+* Email invoices from your phone to request money
+* Wallet file is backed up in the cloud (synced to your Google account) so your coins are not lost if you lose your phone.
 
 Installation
 -------------
 
-You can [download and install the app here](http://example.com/) from the Android Market.
+You can [download and install the app](http://example.com/) from the Android Market.
 
 Or search for "bitcoin" from your mobile device.
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ Contributing
 Credits
 -------
 
-Bitcoin Wallet is based on the excellent [bitcoinj](http://code.google.com/p/bitcoinj/) library by Mike Hearn at Google.
+Bitcoin Wallet is based on the excellent [bitcoinj](http://code.google.com/p/bitcoinj/) library by Mike Hearn at Google.  He deserves some very special thanks!
 
 It also makes use of the [zxing](http://code.google.com/p/zxing/) library for processing QR codes.