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 ##### What conclusions can you draw from the numbers to date?
 
-A terrific data analyst, Emily Parker, who runs DataViz.fyi, has created a graphical analysis breaking down the data and drawing some vital comparisons. Note: There is a short lag between the time we enter data and the time it filters through to Emily's analysis page - which only shows up in the ten minutes or so after I finish adding to the database. 
+A terrific data analyst, Emily Parker, who runs DataViz.fyi, has created a graphical analysis breaking down the data and drawing some vital comparisons. Note: There is a short lag between the time we enter data and the time it filters through to Emily's analysis page - the lag only shows up in the ten minutes or so after I finish adding to the database. 
 
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