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Co-authored-by: Charith Ellawala <charithe@users.noreply.github.com>
Signed-off-by: Oğuzhan Durgun <oguzhandurgun95@gmail.com>

docs/modules/deployment/pages/cloud-platforms.adoc

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ primary_region = '<REGION>' <2>
   path = "/_cerbos/metrics"
 ----
 <1> The name of the link:https://fly.io/docs/apps[Fly App]
-<2> Pick a link:https://fly.io/docs/reference/regions/#fly-io-regions[region]
+<2> Pick a Fly.io link:https://fly.io/docs/reference/regions/#fly-io-regions[region]
 
 The example above launches a Cerbos instance with the
 xref:configuration:index.adoc#minimal-configuration[minimal configuration] using an empty
@@ -76,9 +76,12 @@ link:https://fly.io/docs/reference/tigris[Tigris]. To set the credentials for ac
 `flyctl secrets` command.
 [source,bash]
 ----
-flyctl secrets set AWS_ACCESS_KEY_ID=<AWS_ACCESS_KEY_ID>
-flyctl secrets set AWS_SECRET_ACCESS_KEY=<AWS_SECRET_ACCESS_KEY>
+flyctl secrets set AWS_ACCESS_KEY_ID=tid_XXXXXX <1>
+flyctl secrets set AWS_SECRET_ACCESS_KEY=tsec_XXXXXX <2>
 ----
+<1> Tigris key ID
+<2> Tigris secret access key
+
 
 [source,toml,linenums,subs="attributes+"]
 ----
@@ -143,13 +146,12 @@ primary_region = '<REGION>' <2>
   path = "/_cerbos/metrics"
 ----
 <1> The name of the link:https://fly.io/docs/apps[Fly App]
-<2> Pick a link:https://fly.io/docs/reference/regions/#fly-io-regions[region]
+<2> Pick a Fly.io link:https://fly.io/docs/reference/regions/#fly-io-regions[region]
 <3> Bucket name
 
 === Using LiteFS as a policy repository
 
-Cerbos `sqlite3` driver can be used with storage backend such as link:https://fly.io/docs/litefs[LiteFS]. There are some
-steps to take to use LiteFS with Cerbos.
+Fly.io's distributed SQLite storage layer link:https://fly.io/docs/litefs[LiteFS] can be used for policy storage using Cerbos' `sqlite3` driver.
 
 ==== LiteFS configuration
 
@@ -181,14 +183,10 @@ lease:
 <1> LiteFS requires us to set the command in the LiteFS configuration instead of using the Dockerfile. When LiteFS is
 run it runs the command specified and waits until it exits.
 
-NOTE: link:https://fly.io/docs/litefs/getting-started-docker/#configuring-litefs[Configuring LiteFS] page shows
-additional parameters for configuration.
+NOTE: Refer to link:https://fly.io/docs/litefs/getting-started-docker/#configuring-litefs[Configuring LiteFS] documentation for other available configuration parameters.
 
-=== Dockerfile
 
-Create a Dockerfile (`Dockerfile`)
-
-.Dockerfile
+.Create a Dockerfile
 [source,Dockerfile,subs="attributes+"]
 ----
 FROM flyio/litefs:0.5 AS litefs
@@ -205,7 +203,7 @@ ENTRYPOINT ["litefs"]
 CMD ["mount"]
 ----
 
-=== Create a `fly.toml` to launch Cerbos
+.Create a `fly.toml` to launch Cerbos
 [source,toml,linenums,subs="attributes+"]
 ----
 app = '<APPLICATION_NAME>' <1>
@@ -258,14 +256,10 @@ primary_region = '<REGION>' <2>
 <2> Pick a link:https://fly.io/docs/reference/regions/#fly-io-regions[region]
 <3> Destination must be equal to the one specified in the `litefs.yaml`
 
-=== Lease configuration
-
-Add a Consul URL by running the following command.
-
+.Add a Consul URL to manage LiteFS leases.
 [source,bash]
 ----
 flyctl consul attach
 ----
 
-NOTE: See more details in link:https://fly.io/docs/litefs/getting-started-fly/#lease-configuration[lease configuration]
-section.
+NOTE: See link:https://fly.io/docs/litefs/getting-started-fly/#lease-configuration[lease configuration] for more details.