Updating the meta description

src/closing-disclosure/index.html

@@ -3,8 +3,9 @@
 {% set active_page = "closing-disclosure" %}
 {% set page_js = "closing-disclosure" %}
 
+
 {% block title %}Closing Disclosure Explainer{% endblock title %}
-{% block metadescription %}Use the CFPB's tool to double-check that all the details about your loan are correct on your Closing Disclosure.{% endblock metadescription %}
+{% block metadescription %}Use this tool to double-check that all the details about your loan are correct on your Closing Disclosure. If something looks incorrect or unexpected, ask why.{% endblock metadescription %}
 
 {% block content %}
 <main class="content">
@@ -56,7 +57,7 @@ <h1 class="page-title">Closing Disclosure Explainer</h1>
         <div class="col-12">
           {% include "ratings-form.html" %}
         </div>
-        
+
     </div>
   </div>
 

src/explore-rates/index.html

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
 {% block title %}Explore interest rates{% endblock title %}
 
-{% block metadescription %}Use the CFPB's tool throughout your homebuying process to explore the range of mortgage interest rates you can expect to receive.{% endblock metadescription %}
+{% block metadescription %}Use this tool throughout your homebuying process to see how your credit score, home price, down payment, and more can affect mortgage interest rates.{% endblock metadescription %}
 
 {% block content %}
 <main class="content">
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ <h3 class="subhead">About this tool</h3>
       </div><!-- END .rate-checker -->
 
       {% include "no_js.html" %}
-      
+
     </div> <!-- /.content_main -->
   </div> <!-- /.content_wrapper -->
   <div class="u-mt30 rate-checker_links">

src/loan-estimate/index.html

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 {% set page_js = "loan-estimate" %}
 
 {% block title %}Loan Estimate Explainer{% endblock title %}
-{% block metadescription %}Use the CFPB's tool to review your Loan Estimate to make sure it reflects what you discussed with the lender.{% endblock metadescription %}
+{% block metadescription %}A Loan Estimate tells you important details about a mortgage loan you have requested. Use this tool to make sure it’s accurate—and what you expected.{% endblock metadescription %}
 
 {% block content %}
 <main class="content">
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ <h1 class="page-title">Loan Estimate Explainer</h1>
       <div class="col-12">
         {% include "ratings-form.html" %}
       </div>
-      
+
     </div><!-- /.form-explainer -->
   </div>
 

src/loan-options/index.html

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
 {% block title %}Understand loan options{% endblock title %}
 
-{% block metadescription %}Not all home loans are the same. Use the CFPB's guide to understand how different variables affect your monthly payment, your overall costs, and your level of risk.{% endblock metadescription %}
+{% block metadescription %}Not all home loans are the same. Use our guide to understand how your loan choice affects your monthly payment, your overall costs, and the level of risk.{% endblock metadescription %}
 
 {% block content %}
 <main class="content" id="main">
@@ -425,8 +425,8 @@ <h4>Special programs</h4>
     ]%}
     {{ brand_footer.render(footer_links) }}
   </aside>
-  
-  
+
+
 </main>
 
 

src/mortgage-closing/index.html

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 {% import "social-media.html" as social_media with context %}
 {% set active_page = "mortgage-closing" %}
 {% block title %}Questions about your closing?{% endblock title %}
-{% block metadescription %}Are you about to close on your mortgage loan? The CFPB's checklist and interactive sample Closing Disclosure form will help you close with confidence.{% endblock metadescription %}
+{% block metadescription %}Our interactive sample Closing Disclosure helps you double-check the details and get definitions for terms used on the form.{% endblock metadescription %}
 
 {% block content %}
 <main class="content content__2-1 content__bleedbar form-resources" id="main" role="main">

src/mortgage-estimate/index.html

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 {% import "social-media.html" as social_media with context %}
 {% set active_page = "mortgage-estimate" %}
 {% block title %}Questions about the mortgage process?{% endblock title %}
-{% block metadescription %}If you’ve received a Loan Estimate, you may be wondering what's next. The CFPB's tools and resources help you choose a mortgage that’s right for you.{% endblock metadescription %}
+{% block metadescription %}Our interactive sample form helps you double-check the details and get definitions for terms used on a Loan Estimate.{% endblock metadescription %}
 {% block content %}
 <main class="content content__2-1 content__bleedbar form-resources" id="main" role="main">
   <section class="hero hero__mortage-estimate">

src/process/_vars-process.html

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-{% set process_steps = 
+{% set process_steps =
     [
         {
             "url": "prepare",
             "title": "Prepare <br/>to shop",
             "slug": "prepare-to-shop",
             "page_title": "Prepare to shop",
-            "metadescription": "Before you start shopping for a home and mortgage, use our step-by-step guide to check your credit, assess your finances, set your home-price budget and more.",
+            "metadescription": "Before shopping for a home and mortgage, use our step-by-step guide to check your credit, assess your finances, set your budget, and more.",
             "social": {
                 "twitter_text": "Check out the 8 steps to prepare to buy a home from @cfpb.",
                 "email_title": "8 steps to prepare to buy a home",
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
             "title": "Explore <br/>loan choices",
             "slug": "explore-loan-options",
             "page_title": "Explore loan choices",
-            "metadescription": "Don’t wait until you find a home to start thinking about how to finance it. Use the CFPB’s guide to meet with lenders and ask the right questions.",
+            "metadescription": "As you explore loan choices, follow these steps to meet with lenders, ask questions, and decide what kind of mortgage is right for you.",
             "social": {
                 "twitter_text": "Wondering what kind of mortgage is right for you? @CFPB can help!:",
                 "email_title": "Be a mortgage explorer: Learn your options",
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
             "title": "Compare <br/>loan offers",
             "slug": "compare-and-negotiate-loan-packages",
             "page_title": "Compare loan offers",
-            "metadescription": "Ready to choose a mortgage loan and a lender? Use the CFPB’s guide to get and compare Loan Estimates from different lenders.",
+            "metadescription": "When you find the right home, it’s time to find the right mortgage. Compare options from at least 3 lenders to choose the loan that's right for you.",
             "social": {
                 "twitter_text": "To get the best deal on your mortgage, get more than one loan offer. @CFPB shows you how:",
                 "email_title": "Choose the mortgage loan offer that’s right for you.",
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
             "title": "Get ready <br/>to close",
             "slug": "decide-and-close",
             "page_title": "Get ready to close",
-            "metadescription": "Ready to close on a home? Use the CFPB’s guide for help reviewing your closing documents, shopping for homeowner’s and title insurance, and more.",
+            "metadescription": "Signing your closing documents is the final step in the homebuying process. Here’s a breakdown of the paperwork and other things you need to keep track of.",
             "social": {
                 "twitter_text": "@CFPB helps you close with confidence on your mortgage:",
                 "email_title": "Get ready to close on your mortgage",
@@ -67,6 +67,3 @@
         }
     ]
 %}
-
-
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