Improve writing, latest version hint

Dev/HPC/spec2006.md

@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 title: Spec CPU 2006
 linkTitle: Spec2006
 author: Christian Külker
-date: 2022-06-16
-version: 0.1.3
+date: 2023-03-11
+version: 0.1.4
 type: doc
 disclaimer: True
 toc: True
@@ -12,20 +12,21 @@ categories:
 - Benchmark
 tags:
 - Spec2006
-description: Spec CPU 2006 Benchmark
+description: Spec CPU 2006 benchmark
 
 ---
 
-The SPEC CPU 2006 benchmark by Standard Performance Evaluation Corporation
-(SPEC) is a proprietary Benchmark used until September 2017. The Benchmark
-suite includes SPECint® benchmarks and SECfp® benchmarks. The SPECint® 2006
-benchmark contains 12 different benchmark tests and the SPECfp® 2006 benchmark
-contains 19 different benchmark tests. It can be used to measure computer speed
-or throughput.
+The SPEC CPU 2006 benchmark from the Standard Performance Evaluation
+Corporation (SPEC) is a proprietary benchmark in use until September 2017. The
+benchmark suite includes SPECint® benchmarks and SECfp® benchmarks. The
+SPECint® 2006 benchmark includes 12 different benchmark tests and the SPECfp®
+2006 benchmark includes 19 different benchmark tests. It can be used to measure
+computer speed or throughput.
 
 {{% pageinfo %}}
 
-This benchmark has been replaced with SPEC CPU® 2017.
+This benchmark has been superseded by SPEC CPU® 2017, version 1.1.9 as of
+2023-03-11.
 
 {{% /pageinfo %}}
 
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ bin/runspec -c intel2 --action=run --define external --rate 24 --define smt \
 
 ## Minimal Install On CentOS 7
 
-Spec CPU 2006 need to be purchased.
+Spec CPU 2006 must be purchased.
 
 ### Dependencies
 
@@ -97,7 +98,7 @@ cd /home/hpc/mnt/
 ./install.sh
 ```
 
-Enter the directory you wish to install to (e.g. `/usr/cpu2006`)
+Specify the directory in which you want to install (e.g. `/usr/cpu2006`).
 
 ```bash
 /cpu2006
@@ -127,7 +128,7 @@ ln -s sysinfo.6818 sysinfo
 
 ### Intel Compiler
 
-The `URL` depend on the compiler you want to use
+The `URL` depends on the compiler you want to use
 
 ```bash
 #wget http://registrationcenter-download.intel.com/akdlm/irc_nas/2871/l_ics_2013.0.028.tgz
@@ -164,11 +165,11 @@ bin/runspec -c aurora --action=run --define external --rate=40 --define smt \
 
 ### Power Measurement
 
-A power measurement example can be as follows (assuming the logic of power
-measurement is provided in the script `query`). The content of this script is
-not provided as the way of measurement is very much architecture dependent.
-The loop queries the power supply for 21600 seconds every second, that is 6
-hours.
+An example of a power measurement could be as follows (assuming the power
+measurement logic is provided in the `query` script). The content of this
+script is not provided, as the way the measurement is done is very architecture
+dependent. The loop queries the power supply every second for 21600 seconds,
+or 6 hours.
 
 ```bash
 for i in {1..21600}; do ./query $i >> 2013-10-22-1900.log; sleep 1; done
@@ -183,6 +184,7 @@ for i in {1..21600}; do ./query $i >> 2013-10-22-1900.log; sleep 1; done
 
 | Version | Date       | Notes                                                |
 | ------- | ---------- | ---------------------------------------------------- |
+| 0.1.4   | 2023-03-11 | Improve writing, latest version hint                 |
 | 0.1.3   | 2022-06-16 | History, shell->bash                                 |
 | 0.1.2   | 2020-12-27 | Typos, more explanations                             |
 | 0.1.1   | 2020-05-03 | Typos, replacement remark                            |