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Tell a bit more about SQL name resolution. #1050
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Review status: 0 of 4 files reviewed at latest revision, 1 unresolved discussion. sql-name-resolution.md, line 7 at r1 (raw file):
Such a welcome surprise to get these PRs from you, @knz! So I can get a better understanding of what this page does for users, can I get you to reframe this introductory paragraph? I like to think of the first line of a technical document as "making sure the reader knows what they get by reading this doc." I think this is most of the way there, but I'm wondering if we can make this a little more explicit? When/why would someone use this page? What are the actions someone has recently taken that would lead them to need the info you've outlined here? Comments from Reviewable |
Review status: 0 of 4 files reviewed at latest revision, 1 unresolved discussion. sql-name-resolution.md, line 7 at r1 (raw file): Previously, sploiselle (Sean Loiselle) wrote…
I just moved some text at the beginning for this purpose. PTAL Comments from Reviewable |
LGTM, with some comments. Thanks for this addition, @knz! In a separate PR, I've arrange general SQL syntax topics under a new subsection of Develop. I'll put this there once it's been merged. Reviewed 3 of 4 files at r1, 1 of 1 files at r2. sql-expressions.md, line 36 at r2 (raw file):
I'd reformat this section a bit:
sql-expressions.md, line 283 at r2 (raw file):
sql-name-resolution.md, line 7 at r1 (raw file): General American English style nit: use a comma after In second sentence, for readability, let's move the example into parentheses:
In third sentence, let's stick with
sql-name-resolution.md, line 24 at r2 (raw file):
Let's make the two top-level bullets a bit more direct:
sql-name-resolution.md, line 28 at r2 (raw file):
nit: If the name is not found, produce an error. sql-name-resolution.md, line 39 at r2 (raw file):
Make
sql-name-resolution.md, line 44 at r2 (raw file):
Also a nit: Remove quotes around Comments from Reviewable |
Review status: all files reviewed at latest revision, 7 unresolved discussions. sql-expressions.md, line 36 at r2 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
Done. sql-expressions.md, line 283 at r2 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
Done. sql-name-resolution.md, line 7 at r1 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
I have adjusted these occurrences but also some others I found in sql-expressions.md. Thanks for pointing this out. sql-name-resolution.md, line 24 at r2 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
Done. sql-name-resolution.md, line 28 at r2 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
Done. sql-name-resolution.md, line 39 at r2 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
Done. sql-name-resolution.md, line 44 at r2 (raw file): Previously, jseldess wrote…
The quotes around the second occurrence is because we're talking about the text of the prefix, not the thing named pg_catalog. Comments from Reviewable |
Reviewed 2 of 2 files at r3. Comments from Reviewable |
There's a broken internal link preventing the tests from succeeding, but I'll fix that in a follow-up PR. |
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