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Genart review fixes #102

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Fixed EXI example offsets and typos
akeranen Mar 30, 2018
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Added Roni to ACKs for genart review
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11 changes: 6 additions & 5 deletions draft-ietf-core-senml.md
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### Collection of Resources {#rest-ex}

The following example shows the results from a query to one device
that aggregates multiple measurements from another devices. The example
that aggregates multiple measurements from other devices. The example
assumes that a client has fetched information from a device at
2001:db8::2 by performing a GET operation on http://\[2001:db8::2\] at
Mon Oct 31 16:27:09 UTC 2011, and has gotten two separate values as a
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A small temperature sensor device that only generates this one EXI
file does not really need an full EXI implementation. It can simply
file does not really need a full EXI implementation. It can simply
hard code the output replacing the 1-wire device ID starting at byte
0x20 and going to byte 0x2F with it's device ID, and replacing the
value "0xe7 0x01" at location 0x37 and 0x38 with the current
0x14 and going to byte 0x23 with its device ID, and replacing the
value "0xe7 0x01" at location 0x31 and 0x32 with the current
temperature. The EXI Specification {{W3C.REC-exi-20140211}} contains
the full information on how floating point numbers are represented,
but for the purpose of this sensor, the temperature can be converted
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Christian Groves, Daniel Peintner, Jan-Piet Mens, Jim Schaad, Joe
Hildebrand, John Klensin, Karl Palsson, Lennart Duhrsen, Lisa
Dusseault, Lyndsay Campbell, Martin Thomson, Michael Koster, Peter
Saint-Andre, and Stephen Farrell, for their review comments.
Saint-Andre, Roni Even, and Stephen Farrell, for their review
comments.


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