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dankraus · Jul 25, 2023 · 1fd49fa · 1fd49fa
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diff --git a/src/pages/index.astro b/src/pages/index.astro
@@ -4,8 +4,6 @@ const pageTitle = "Hey, I'm Dan";
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 <BaseLayout pageTitle={pageTitle}>
-  ... look for all the pages for published on and grab their preview image and
-  preview text and aggregate here ... I'm a software engineer by trade and a
-  scale model maker, figure painter, prop replica builder, and very amateur
-  photographer.
+  I'm a software engineer by trade and a scale model maker, figure painter, prop
+  replica builder, and very amateur photographer.
 </BaseLayout>