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 the data.
 
 As you read through the text, take note of the times where the Assistant is drawing on its knowledge
-which is outside of the data ("the shift towards more melancholic, minor-key melodies"). When you
-are working with up to the times content, the Assistant can augment your conversation with its own
-knowledge.
+outside of the data ("The evolution of her style reflects Taylor's desire to continuously challenge
+herself artistically..."). When you are working with up to the times content, the Assistant can
+augment your conversation with its own knowledge.
 
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