Update garbage-collection.md

Incorporate changes based on Corey's comments.

ee/dtr/admin/configure/garbage-collection.md

@@ -13,27 +13,26 @@ layers, thus saving you disk space. This process is also known as garbage collec
 First you configure DTR to run a garbage collection job on a fixed schedule. At
 the scheduled time DTR:
 
-2. Identifies and marks unused image layers.
-3. Deletes the marked image layers.
+1. Identifies and marks unused image layers.
+2. Deletes the marked image layers.
 
-By default, when the garbage collection job starts DTR is put in read-only mode.
+When garbage collection starts, DTR is put into read-only mode by default.
+
+## Improved garbage collection (Experimental)
 
 Starting in DTR 2.5, you can configure DTR to run garbage collection jobs
 without putting DTR in read-only. This feature is still experimental.
 
-To enable this, navigate to the **DTR web interface**, go to **Settings** and
-choose **Garbage collection**.
+To enable this, navigate to the **DTR web interface**. Select **Settings > Garbage collection**.
 
 ![upgrade garbage collection](../../images/garbage-collection-0.png){: .with-border}
 
-Once enabled this setting can't be changed back. The upgrade process might
-take a while depending on the amount of Docker images that you have stored.
-
+Once enabled, this setting can't be changed back. The upgrade process might
+take a while depending on the amount of Docker images that you have stored. Garbage collection is temporarily 
+disabled during the upgrade to the experimental version.
+
 ![upgrade garbage collection](../../images/garbage-collection-upgrade.png){: .with-border}
 
-During this upgrade, users can still push and pull images from DTR but
-the garbage collection job will be temporarily disabled. 
-
 ### Metadata Store Migration
 
 After a successful upgrade, the system will run a `metadatastoremigration` job which is necessary for online garbage collection. If the migration fails, the system will retry twice. If all three attempts fail, you will have to retrigger the `metadatastoremigration` job manually via the API. To check for the status of the `metadatastoremigration` job:
@@ -68,7 +67,8 @@ configure its schedule (in UTC time) using the cron format.
 
 Once everything is configured you can chose to **Save & start** to immediately
 run the garbage collection job, or just **Save** to run the job on the next
-scheduled interval.
+scheduled interval. If you've upgraded to [the experimental version](#improved-garbage-collection), you 
+should be able to push and pull images while garbage collection is running.
 
 ## Stop the garbage collection job
 
@@ -112,3 +112,4 @@ can be safely deleted.
 ## Where to go next
 
 - [Deploy DTR caches](deploy-caches/index.md)
+- [Upgrade DTR](../upgrade/)