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Transit Provider (ITP) in order to mitigate a DDoS attack targeting its
network. To improve the clarity of our purpose, the targeted network
will be designated as enterprise network, but the same scenario applies
to any downstream network, including residential network. As the ITP
provides connectivity to the enterprise network, it is already on the
path of the inbound or outbound traffic of the enterprise network and
well aware of the networking parameters associated to the enterprise
network connectivity. This eases both the configuration and the
instantiation of a DDoS Mitigation Service. This section considers two
kind of DDoS Mitigation Service between an enterprise network and an
ITP:
to any downstream network, including residential network and cloud
hosting network. As the ITP provides connectivity to the enterprise
network, it is already on the path of the inbound or outbound traffic of
the enterprise network and well aware of the networking parameters
associated to the enterprise network connectivity. This eases both the
configuration and the instantiation of a DDoS Mitigation Service. This
section considers two kind of DDoS Mitigation Service between an
enterprise network and an ITP:

* The upstream ITP may instantiate a DDoS Mitigation System (DMS) upon
receiving a request from the enterprise network. This typically
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+------------------+ +------------------+
| Entreprise | | Upstream |
| Enterprise | | Upstream |
| Network | | Internet Transit |
| | | Provider |
| +--------+ | | DDoS Attack
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another DDoS Mitigation Service Provider.

+------------------+ +------------------+
| Entreprise | | Upstream |
| Enterprise | | Upstream |
| Network | | Internet Transit |
| | | Provider |
| +--------+ | | DDoS Attack
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used for traffic steering are out of scope.

+------------------+ +------------------+
| Entreprise | | Upstream |
| Enterprise | | Upstream |
| Network | | Internet Transit |
| | | Provider |
| +--------+ | | DDoS Attack
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DOTS R. Dobbins
Internet-Draft Arbor Networks
Intended status: Informational D. Migault
Expires: December 29, 2018 Ericsson
Expires: January 5, 2019 Ericsson
S. Fouant

R. Moskowitz
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Huawei
K. Nishizuka
NTT Communications
June 27, 2018
July 04, 2018


Use cases for DDoS Open Threat Signaling
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time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference
material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."

This Internet-Draft will expire on December 29, 2018.
This Internet-Draft will expire on January 5, 2019.





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Copyright Notice
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of DOTS is to provide high-level interaction amongst differing DDoS
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residential network. As the ITP provides connectivity to the
enterprise network, it is already on the path of the inbound or
outbound traffic of the enterprise network and well aware of the
networking parameters associated to the enterprise network
connectivity. This eases both the configuration and the
residential network and cloud hosting network. As the ITP provides
connectivity to the enterprise network, it is already on the path of
the inbound or outbound traffic of the enterprise network and well
aware of the networking parameters associated to the enterprise
network connectivity. This eases both the configuration and the
instantiation of a DDoS Mitigation Service. This section considers
two kind of DDoS Mitigation Service between an enterprise network and
an ITP:
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+------------------+ +------------------+
| Entreprise | | Upstream |
| Enterprise | | Upstream |
| Network | | Internet Transit |
| | | Provider |
| +--------+ | | DDoS Attack
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Over the course of the attack, the DOTS server of the ITP
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request to the upstream ITP, in which case the request may be sent
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+------------------+ +------------------+
| Entreprise | | Upstream |
| Enterprise | | Upstream |
| Network | | Internet Transit |
| | | Provider |
| +--------+ | | DDoS Attack
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+------------------+ +------------------+
| Entreprise | | Upstream |
| Enterprise | | Upstream |
| Network | | Internet Transit |
| | | Provider |
| +--------+ | | DDoS Attack
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The orchestrator analyses the various information it receives from
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+----------+
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mitigation, the network administrator triggers the DDoS mitigation
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7. Informative References
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Nik Teague
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