feat(content): Changes to Pre-war Missions

.codespell.exclude

@@ -89,9 +89,8 @@ planet "Sies Upi"
 		"Mis"
 			`	Torrey breaks out into a brilliant grin. "Well, that's great news, then. You'll find Irene at the militia base on <destination> - that's Gunnery Sergeant Irene Brower. I do appreciate this. You'll be paid upon receipt of the package, too, lest you think my appreciation is all I can give."`
 			`You arrive at the militia base on <destination>, and ask at the gate for Gunnery Sergeant Irene Brower. After a few minutes, a compact young woman with close-cropped blonde hair appears and walks over. When she sees the package at your feet, her face splits into a lopsided grin and her steps quicken. "I see you've brought me a package; this must be from Torrey! She said she was sending something."`
-			`	Staying carefully out of the way of the hurrying corpsmen and nurses, you watch as the triage tent begins to fill up with the walking wounded, the not-so-walking wounded... and a few gurneys that someone pulls a sheet over not long after they arrive. Before long, you spot someone you think you recognize: Irene Brower, the gunnery sergeant you delivered a care package to before the war.`
-			`		MSGT BROWER, IRENE`
-			`As you leave the quartermaster's building, you spot a familiar face coming in the other direction: Irene Brower, the gunnery sergeant you delivered a care package to before the war, though she seems to have master sergeant insignia now. She's on crutches, with what looks like a brand-new prosthetic leg. When she spots you, her pained face brightens. "Hey, I know you! You brought me that package from Tor before. Thanks!" She shifts her weight, then winces and shifts it back.`
+			`		MSGT IRENE BROWER`
+			`As you step out of your ship, you spot a familiar face: Irene Brower, the gunnery sergeant you delivered a care package to before the war, though she seems to have master sergeant insignia now. She's on crutches, with what looks like a brand-new prosthetic leg. When she spots you, her pained face brightens. "Hey, I know you! You brought me that package from Tor before. Thanks!" She shifts her weight, then winces and shifts it back.`
 		log "Minor People" "Torrey and Irene" `Torrey Dupont, an activist, is friends with SMDP militia NCO Irene Brower. You delivered a package for them.`
 		"Brin"
 		"exis"

data/human/campaign events.txt

@@ -1151,6 +1151,13 @@ event "Greenrock recovered"
 
 
 
+event "memorial on Deep"
+	planet "Deep"
+		spaceport `The spaceport is built on a large island, a now-extinct volcano with an elevation of several kilometers at its center. Most of the large-scale fishing here is done by a single company, Poseidon Industries, which also built and maintains the spaceport. Steep winding roads and sturdy concrete homes and warehouses line the mountain slopes, and below you in the harbor several massive trawling vessels are moored. On the outskirts of the spaceport are the ramshackle houses and open-air marketplace used by the smaller, independent fishing families.`
+		spaceport `	Positioned north of the spaceport is the Free Worlds War Memorial, a series of granite walls engraved with the names of the fallen. The nine completed walls are already filled on both sides; it seems unlikely the other fourteen walls will last the war.`
+
+
+
 event "flamethrower available"
 	outfitter "Kraz Advanced"
 		"Flamethrower"
@@ -1503,6 +1510,13 @@ event "fw southern expansion"
 
 
 
+event "Deep memorial expansion 1"
+	planet "Deep"
+		spaceport `The spaceport is built on a large island, a now-extinct volcano with an elevation of several kilometers at its center. Most of the large-scale fishing here is done by a single company, Poseidon Industries, which also built and maintains the spaceport. Steep winding roads and sturdy concrete homes and warehouses line the mountain slopes, and below you in the harbor several massive trawling vessels are moored. On the outskirts of the spaceport are the ramshackle houses and open-air marketplace used by the smaller, independent fishing families.`
+		spaceport `	Positioned north of the spaceport is the Free Worlds War Memorial. The site has progressed from its original scale, with an outer ring being erected to hold fifty additional walls.`
+
+
+
 event "fw occupying the north"
 	system "Alioth"
 		fleet "Small Southern Merchants" 400
@@ -3088,6 +3102,22 @@ event "syndicate tech available"
 
 
 
+event "Deep memorial completed"
+	planet "Deep"
+		spaceport `The spaceport is built on a large island, a now-extinct volcano with an elevation of several kilometers at its center. Most of the large-scale fishing here is done by a single company, Poseidon Industries, which also built and maintains the spaceport. Steep winding roads and sturdy concrete homes and warehouses line the mountain slopes, and below you in the harbor several massive trawling vessels are moored. On the outskirts of the spaceport are the ramshackle houses and open-air marketplace used by the smaller, independent fishing families.`
+		spaceport `	Positioned north of the spaceport is the Free Worlds War Memorial, a series of granite walls engraved with the names of the fallen. Two additional rings of walls have been constructed around both the first twenty-three walls and the fifty walls of the old outer ring.`
+
+mission "Deep Memorial Finished"
+	landing
+	invisible
+	to offer
+		has "main plot completed"
+	on offer
+		event "Deep memorial completed"
+		fail
+
+
+
 event "geminus rebuilt"
 	planet "Geminus"
 		description `Geminus, although not the most hospitable of worlds, is a young enough planet that large stores of iron, titanium, and other metals are easily accessible near the surface. The constant volcanic activity leaves the planet perpetually shrouded in a twilight haze of ash and fog.`

data/human/free worlds 1 start.txt

@@ -2249,6 +2249,7 @@ mission "FW Rogue Elements"
 		has "event: wolf pack reveal"
 	on offer
 		event "navy occupying the south" 45
+		event "memorial on Deep"
 		conversation
 			`After you land, you notice that a sizeable crowd has gathered around a video screen near the edge of the <origin> spaceport. You approach to find out what's going on. You're about to ask someone what's happening when you overhear Tomek's voice coming from screen. You look up to see a video of Tomek standing atop a Free Worlds warship and addressing an unseen crowd.`
 			`	"For generations we have been neglected by the Republic!" he shouts. "Our grievances were ignored! Our pain and suffering was ignored! Our needs were ignored! We cried out for help, and yet the Republic did nothing, allowing our planets to be ravaged by piracy while continuing to tax our credits for services we were not provided. And as the years have gone on the pirates have only become more and more emboldened.`

data/human/free worlds 2 middle.txt

@@ -716,6 +716,7 @@ mission "FW Southern Break"
 	on offer
 		log "Once again there is no immediate work to be done for the Free Worlds. This would be a good time to earn some money for an upgraded ship, if possible."
 		event "fw occupying the north" 50
+		event "Deep memorial expansion 1"
 		"salary: Free Worlds" >?= 2100
 		conversation
 			`You land on Dancer and report to Alondo and Freya that the prisoner transfer is complete. "What do we do now?" you ask.`

data/human/free worlds side plots.txt

@@ -306,6 +306,31 @@ mission "FW Conservatory 2B"
 
 
 
+mission "FW Deep Memorial"
+	landing
+	source "Deep"
+	to offer
+		has "event: memorial on Deep"
+		not "event: navy occupying the south"
+	on offer
+		conversation
+			`As you disembark, you hear the sounds of warning sirens and heavy machinery coming from the edge of <planet>'s spaceport. It doesn't take long to find the source of the noise: several large construction vehicles are paving a large clearing at the edge of a cliff. At its center are nine large walls covered in letters, with spaces reserved for an additional fourteen walls. The largest wall is emblazoned with the text "Free Worlds War Memorial." Already, there are friends and family paying their respects to the ever-growing number of fallen.`
+			branch browershutupcodespell end
+				has "FW Pirates: Attack 2: done"
+				has "Care Package to South 1: done"
+			label browershutupcodespell
+			`	As you inspect the walls, you recognize one of the names:`
+			``
+			`		MSGT IRENE BROWER`
+			`			KILLED AT THE ATTACK ON GREENROCK`
+			``
+			label end
+			`	The sound of construction persists as you return to the main spaceport.`
+				decline
+
+
+
+
 mission "FW Flamethrower 1"
 	landing
 	name "Weapon Testing"