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@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ A new build system should also have the following traits:
 Implementation
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-In order to be able to decide which build system,
+In order to be able to decide on the build system,
 we suggest implementing a proof-of-concept implementation of each contender.
 This proof-of-concept implementation should follow these specific guidelines,
 so that it will be possible to do a fair comparison:
@@ -125,10 +125,11 @@ How to Teach This
 =================
 
 Documentation for core developers and contributors will be added to the docs and devguide.
-HowTo guides for specific use cases like deterministic builds and cross-building will be added.
+How-to guides for specific use cases like deterministic builds and cross-building will be added.
 
-Most users, beginners included, are not not affected,
-as they are not expected to ever need to interface the build system.
+Most users are not not affected,
+as they are not expected to ever need to interact with the build system.
+This includes beginners.
 
 
 Reference Implementation
@@ -146,14 +147,14 @@ Keep the current dual build system
 Continuing to maintain the current dual build system will not harmonize
 with the most important desire amongst the core developers: a unified build system.
 
-The duality of the current build system is one of the biggest source of frustrations
+The duality of the current build system is one of the biggest sources of frustrations
 amongst core developers, contributors and distributors.
 
 
 Use a custom written build script
 ---------------------------------
 
-Instead of chosing an existing build system,
+Instead of choosing an existing build system,
 implement the new build system as a collection of hand-written scripts.
 
 The additional overhead of desiging a specification for such a build system,
@@ -165,7 +166,7 @@ documentation, and a support community.
 Open Issues
 ===========
 
-Implement proof-of-concept build systems for the most promising contenders.
+Choose one of the contenders as the future CPython build system.
 
 
 Footnotes