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Improve the appearance of each indented paragraph that falls below a list item (bullet point). Let's note that indented paragraphs are not a feature of AsciiDoc. (We have a good example of improving a report by not requiring indents, unfortunately I can not find the example.) Add full stops. NIC.br uses uppercase 'NIC' at <https://nic.br/>. Your.Org uses uppercase 'O' at <https://your.org/contact.php>.
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| Since the FreeBSD website is now mostly static, we have begun deploying infrastructure to mirror www.FreeBSD.org and docs.FreeBSD.org around the world in FreeBSD project-managed mirrors. | ||
| * Create a new search database engine for internal FreeBSD.org searching needs like mailing list and docs | ||
| * Create a new search database engine for internal FreeBSD.org searching needs like mailing list and docs. | ||
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| FreeBSD Official Mirrors Overview: |
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With the colon here, should the subsequent paragraph become a list item? (Compare with uses of colons and list items above.)
Alternatively, use a subheading (without a colon).
| @@ -12,22 +12,27 @@ In this quarter, the team has worked on the following: | |||
| * Regular support for FreeBSD.org user accounts | |||
| * Regular disk and parts support (and replacement) for all physical hosts and mirrors | |||
| * Improve the PowerPC package builders + | |||
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I feel that a full stop is needed in places such as this.
The two sentences that follow do have full stops.
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Is this the example you are serching for? |
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Thanks for the thoughts and ideas; I'll submit an update soon. |
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Reported by: grahamperrin Pull Request: #155
That was it, thanks. |
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<https://myren.net.my/> was unreachable (502, bad gateway) when I opened <freebsd#155>, I didn't mention it at the time. Still unreachable. In the Wayback Machine: <https://web.archive.org/web/20220701074213/https://www.myren.net.my/>. <https://www.mohe.gov.my/en/services/research/myren> might be a suitable alternative address.
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#155 corrected use of uppercase for NIC.br and for Your.Org. #156 found a working alternative to a page that is no longer reachable; and English alternatives to two Japanese pages. Other minor changes, to make internal/about consistent with the status report that is changed by PRs 155 and 156. Approved by: dbaio Pull request: #157
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Improve the appearance of each indented paragraph that falls below a list item (bullet point).
Let's note that indented paragraphs are not a feature of AsciiDoc. (We have a good example of improving a report by not requiring indents, unfortunately I can not find the example.)
Add full stops.
NIC.br uses uppercase 'NIC' at https://nic.br/.
Your.Org uses uppercase 'O' at https://your.org/contact.php.