bluetooth/fwdownloader mans: terse descriptions #1266
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usr.sbin/bluetooth/bcmfw/bcmfw.8
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| .Sh NAME | |||
| .Nm bcmfw | |||
| .Nd firmware download utility for Broadcom BCM2033 chip based Bluetooth USB devices | |||
| .Nd install firmware for Broadcom BCM2033 Bluetooth USB devices | |||
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Install isn't quite the right word here... These utilities download the firmware to the device. This usually isn't called 'installing' so I think this part would make things more confusing.
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oh, that was me with the wrong account.
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+ descriptions no longer wrap on a standard console, no keywords removed + more consistent language with other firmware tooling manuals MFC after: 3 days Reviewed by: imp (bumped date for Nd changes) Pull Request: freebsd#1266
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OK. Happy with the new stuff. Added dates and threw away a stray |
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I'm stumped on a better title for this commit. Thanks.