Clean up the move repo guide a bit

_posts/2009-06-25-moving-a-repo.markdown

@@ -7,33 +7,29 @@ categories: repos
 
 This guide details the process of moving a repo to another account.
 
-Organizations
--------------
+Direct move
+-----------
 
-If you wish to move a repo from a user to an organization, please [contact support](http://support.github.com/) with details.
+If you wish to move a repo between users or organizations, please [contact support](http://support.github.com/) with details.  Make sure that there is not a repo with the same name on the destination account, and that the destination account has unused private repos available if the repo being moved is private.
 
-Forking and Rooting
--------------------
+Existing forks
+--------------
 
-The simplest route to transfer ownership is to make a fork and change the root.  To do this:
+If a fork of the repo you wish to move already exists on the target account, you can [contact support](http://support.github.com/) to have the roots switched.  Note that deleting the root repo will either delete all forks if the repo is private, or automatically pick a new root if the repo is public.  You cannot pick which repo will become the root, so please contact support if you want a specific repo to become the new root.
 
-* Add the new owner as a collab if the repo is private
-* Fork the repo on the new owner's account
-* Contact [support](support@github.com) from the email of the current owner's account and request the new owner's fork be made the root.
-
-Note that if the repo is private the new owner will need a paid plan to support the repo.  Issues, wikis, pages, commits comments and non-repo downloads will not be transferred to the new root.  Make sure you do not delete your old repo if you have any of these you wish to keep.
+Note that if the repo is private the new owner will need a paid plan to support the repo.  Issues, wikis, pages, commits comments and non-repo downloads **will not** be transferred to the new root.  Make sure you do not delete your old repo if you have any of these you wish to keep.
 
 Manual clone and push
 ---------------------
 
-This method is a bit more involved, but will create an exact mirror of the repo into the new repo.  Forks, collaborators and non-repo data will **not** be transferred to the new repo, it will be a fresh mirror.
+If you have a repo on an external server that you wish to move to GitHub, you can move it with a special clone and push.  This method will create an exact mirror of the repo into the new repo.
 
 First, create a new repo on the target account.  Next, create a mirror that includes all branches and tags.  To do this you need to do a bare-clone followed by a mirror-push:
 
 <pre class="terminal">
-git clone --bare git@github.com:myaccount/my-old-repo.git
+git clone --bare url/for/my-old-repo.git
 cd my-old-repo
-git push --mirror git@github.com:mycompany/our-new-repo.git
+git push --mirror git@github.com:mycompany/my-new-repo.git
 cd ..
 rm -rf my-old-repo
 </pre>