hb-install-stage: review

gentoojp · Oct 18, 2014 · c315c9e · c315c9e
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diff --git a/xml/htdocs/doc/pofiles/handbook/hb-install-stage.po b/xml/htdocs/doc/pofiles/handbook/hb-install-stage.po
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: PACKAGE VERSION\n"
 "POT-Creation-Date: 2013-12-20 03:12+0900\n"
-"PO-Revision-Date: 2014-09-05 11:10+0900\n"
+"PO-Revision-Date: 2014-10-18 15:35+0900\n"
 "Last-Translator: unarist <m.unarist@gmail.com>\n"
 "Language-Team: LANGUAGE <LL@li.org>\n"
 "Language: \n"
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ msgstr ""
 # unarist: 了解です。fuzzyが取れていた部分も"stage3アーカイブ"にしてfuzzy戻しました。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><title>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:20
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Installing a Stage Tarball"
 msgstr "stage3アーカイブのインストール"
 
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ msgstr "# <i>date 032916212005</i>\n"
 #  unarist: そういえば随分な意訳ですねこれ。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><title>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:54
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Making your Choice"
 msgstr "stage3アーカイブの選択"
 
@@ -149,6 +149,10 @@ msgstr "stage3アーカイブの選択"
 #  "お使いの"とするか、省略してしまった方が良いかもしれません。
 #
 # naota: ここもstage3アーカイブでしょうか
+#
+# naota: 「どのアーカイブをダウンロードするか〜」の部分ちょっともやっとし
+# ますね。2文に分けてもいいかもしれません。
+#
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:58
 #, fuzzy, no-wrap
@@ -166,15 +170,15 @@ msgstr ""
 #  同上。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><title>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:68
-#, no-wrap, fuzzy
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Using a Stage from the Internet"
 msgstr "インターネットからダウンロードしたstage3アーカイブを使う"
 
 #  "stage tarball"
 #  同上。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><title>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:70
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Downloading the Stage Tarball"
 msgstr "stage3アーカイブのダウンロード"
 
@@ -226,7 +230,7 @@ msgstr "# <i>cd /mnt/gentoo</i>\n"
 #  "Gentooのミラーリスト"或いは"ミラーリスト"とした方が良いかもしれません。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:83
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "Depending on your installation medium, you have a couple of tools available to\n"
 "download a stage. If you have <c>links</c> available, then you can immediately\n"
@@ -253,7 +257,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #   るので「環境変数の」とかを付けた方がいいかもしれないです。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:91
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "If you don't have <c>links</c> available you should have <c>lynx</c> at your \n"
 "disposal. If you need to go through a proxy, export the <c>http_proxy</c> and\n"
@@ -309,7 +313,7 @@ msgstr "ここから先は<c>links</c>が使用できると仮定して説明し
 # naota: lynxになってますが、linksでは?
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:106
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "Select a mirror closeby. Usually HTTP mirrors suffice, but other protocols are\n"
 "available as well. Move to the <path><keyval id=\"release-dir\"/></path>\n"
@@ -380,7 +384,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #  この語順ならば、括弧を外しても良いかもしれません。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:131
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "Make sure you download a <b>stage3</b> tarball - installations using a stage1\n"
 "or stage2 tarball are not supported anymore (and in most cases, you will not\n"
@@ -398,7 +402,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #  文末のダブルクォートが抜けていたので足しておきました。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:137
-#, no-wrap, fuzzy
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "If you want to check the integrity of the downloaded stage tarball, use\n"
 "<c>openssl</c> and compare the output with the checksums provided on the\n"
@@ -417,7 +421,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #  とした方が良いかもしれません。
 #. type: Attribute 'caption' of: <sections><section><subsection><body><pre>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:143
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Calculating the integrity checksum of a stage tarball"
 msgstr "stage3アーカイブのチェックサムを計算する"
 
@@ -458,7 +462,7 @@ msgstr ""
 # naota: この部分ですね http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/handbook/handbook-amd64.xml?part=1&chap=2#doc_chap3
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:160
-#, no-wrap, fuzzy
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "Just like with the ISO file, you can also verify the cryptographic signature of\n"
 "the <path>.DIGESTS.asc</path> file using <c>gpg</c> to make sure the checksums\n"
@@ -484,15 +488,15 @@ msgstr "# <i>gpg --verify <keyval id=\"stage3\" />.DIGESTS.asc</i>\n"
 #  同上。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><title>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:172
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Unpacking the Stage Tarball"
 msgstr "stage3アーカイブの展開"
 
 #  "stage"
 #  同上。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:176
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "Now unpack your downloaded stage onto your system. We use <c>tar</c> to proceed\n"
 "as it is the easiest method:\n"
@@ -504,7 +508,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #  同上。
 #. type: Attribute 'caption' of: <sections><section><subsection><body><pre>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:180
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid "Unpacking the stage"
 msgstr "stage3アーカイブの展開"
 
@@ -534,7 +538,7 @@ msgstr ""
 #  同上。
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:201
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "Now that the stage is installed, continue with <uri\n"
 "link=\"#compile_options\">Configuring the Compile Options</uri>.\n"
@@ -622,7 +626,7 @@ msgstr "# <i>nano -w /mnt/gentoo/etc/portage/make.conf</i>\n"
 # naota: 「話題にします」というより「解説します」とするのはどうでしょうか
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:240
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "As you probably noticed, the <path>make.conf.example</path> file is\n"
 "structured in a generic way: commented lines start with \"#\", other lines define\n"
@@ -754,7 +758,7 @@ msgstr ""
 # naota: "before"を弱いというのはどうでしょうか。番号的に「1つ前」の意識かと思っていクした
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><p>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:293
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "A second one is the <c>-O</c> flag (that is a capital O, not a zero),\n"
 "which specifies the <c>gcc</c> optimization\n"
@@ -888,7 +892,7 @@ msgstr ""
 # naota: リンク先が変わっています
 #. type: Content of: <sections><section><subsection><body><note>
 #: en/handbook/hb-install-stage.xml:341
-#, fuzzy, no-wrap
+#, no-wrap
 msgid ""
 "You may also want to view the <uri\n"
 "link=\"https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/GCC_optimization\">Compilation Optimization Guide</uri> for\n"