chore: spelling, grammer and clarity #60
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WalkthroughThe recent updates to the project involve correcting syntax errors in SQL queries across various documentation files related to Kolide plugin tables. Additionally, new queries have been added for listing specific data based on different criteria, enhancing the functionality and completeness of the documentation. Changes
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- .github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/bug-report.md (1 hunks)
- .github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/config.yml (1 hunks)
- .github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/feature-request---new-table.md (1 hunks)
- .github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/feature-request.md (1 hunks)
- .github/PULL_REQUEST_TEMPLATE.md (1 hunks)
- docs/index.md (2 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_admin_user.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_deprovisioned_person.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_device.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_package.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/table_kolide_k2_audit_logs.md (3 hunks)
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- .github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/feature-request---new-table.md
- .github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/feature-request.md
- .github/PULL_REQUEST_TEMPLATE.md
- docs/index.md
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_admin_user.md
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docs/tables/kolide_k2_package.md (1)
9-9: The addition of the SQL code block under the "Basic info" section enhances the documentation by providing a clear example query. This aligns well with the PR's objectives of improving documentation clarity and quality.docs/tables/kolide_k2_deprovisioned_person.md (1)
26-26: Correctly adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query ensures adherence to SQL syntax best practices. This change improves the consistency and quality of the documentation.docs/tables/kolide_k2_device.md (1)
30-30: Adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query is a good practice for ensuring correct SQL syntax. This change contributes to the overall goal of improving documentation quality.docs/tables/table_kolide_k2_audit_logs.md (1)
28-28: The addition of a semicolon at the end of the SQL query ensures adherence to SQL syntax best practices. This change improves the consistency and quality of the documentation..github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/config.yml (1)
1-8: The configuration changes inconfig.ymleffectively guide community contributions by disabling blank issues and providing structured contact links. This aligns with the PR's objectives of improving project management practices..github/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/bug-report.md (1)
1-26: The bug report template is well-structured and provides clear sections for contributors to describe issues comprehensively. This aligns with the PR's objectives of improving project management and contribution processes.
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- docs/tables/kolide_k2_admin_user.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_deprovisioned_person.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_device.md (1 hunks)
- docs/tables/kolide_k2_package.md (2 hunks)
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docs/tables/kolide_k2_package.md (2)
19-29: The SQL query for finding installers with recent releases is clear and follows best practices. However, consider adding a comment within the SQL code block to briefly explain the logic behind usingdate_trunc('day', current_date) - interval '4 weeks'for the benefit of less experienced readers.
31-40: The SQL query for finding the installer URL for macOS is concise and correctly targets macOS installers by usingid like 'darwin%'. This is a good practice for ensuring clarity and specificity in queries. Well done.docs/tables/kolide_k2_admin_user.md (2)
28-29: Adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query is a good practice for ensuring the query is properly terminated. This change improves the syntax consistency across the documentation.
31-44: The SQL query for listing all admins external to the company is clear and correctly uses thenot likeoperator to filter emails. This is a good practice for ensuring the query accurately captures the intended records.docs/tables/kolide_k2_deprovisioned_person.md (2)
17-28: Adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query is a good practice for ensuring the query is properly terminated. This change improves the syntax consistency across the documentation.
30-40: The SQL query for listing all deprovisioned people who have logged in within the past week is clear and correctly usesdate_truncto filter records. This is a good practice for ensuring the query accurately captures the intended records.docs/tables/kolide_k2_device.md (4)
30-31: Adding a semicolon at the end of theorder byclause in the SQL query ensures proper syntax. This change improves the syntax consistency across the documentation.
33-46: The SQL query for listing all Apple devices not on the latest major version of macOS is clear and correctly uses thenot likeoperator to filter operating systems. This is a good practice for ensuring the query accurately captures the intended records.
48-61: The SQL query for listing all Apple devices not on the latest minor version of macOS Sonoma is clear and correctly uses thenot likeoperator to filter operating systems. This is a good practice for ensuring the query accurately captures the intended records.
63-79: The SQL query for listing all Apple devices considered vintage is clear and correctly uses thelikeoperator to filter hardware models. Including a link to the official list of discontinued, vintage, and obsolete products is a thoughtful addition that provides valuable context.
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docs/tables/kolide_k2_package.md (2)
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The document title might contain a spelling mistake. Please ensure "kolide_k2_package" is correctly spelled according to the project's naming conventions.
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The term 'kolide_k2_package' is consistently used across the documentation, suggesting that it is spelled correctly according to the project's naming conventions.
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#!/bin/bash # Verify the correct spelling of 'kolide_k2_package' across the documentation rg --type md 'kolide_k2_package'Length of output: 254
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The added SQL queries enhance the documentation by providing practical examples for users. However, consider adding a brief description for each query to explain its purpose and what users can expect from its execution. This will improve clarity and usability of the documentation.
docs/tables/kolide_k2_device.md (2)
30-30: Adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query is a good practice for maintaining consistency and adhering to SQL syntax standards. Well done on this correction.
33-79: The new SQL queries added to list Apple devices based on different criteria are valuable additions to the documentation. Similar to the previous file, consider adding brief descriptions for each query to explain their purpose and expected outcomes. This will enhance the documentation's clarity and usefulness for the readers.
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- docs/tables/kolide_k2_admin_user.md (1 hunks)
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docs/tables/kolide_k2_audit_log.md (1)
28-28: The SQL query correctly ends with a semicolon now, which is a good practice for ensuring query termination. This change aligns with the PR objectives of fixing syntax issues.docs/tables/kolide_k2_admin_user.md (2)
28-29: Adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query is a good practice for query termination. This change aligns with the PR objectives of fixing syntax issues.
31-44: The addition of new SQL queries to list admins based on specific criteria is a valuable enhancement to the documentation. It provides users with practical examples of how to query the data. Ensure that these queries have been tested and return the expected results.docs/tables/kolide_k2_deprovisioned_person.md (2)
17-28: Adding a semicolon at the end of the SQL query is a good practice for query termination. This change aligns with the PR objectives of fixing syntax issues.
30-55: The addition of new SQL queries to list deprovisioned people based on specific criteria is a valuable enhancement to the documentation. It provides users with practical examples of how to query the data. Ensure that these queries have been tested and return the expected results.
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closes #58
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