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 ## Motivation
 
-A minimum onboarding fee is a necessity to stop subDAOs from arbitrarily onboarding Hotspots. The minimum onboarding fee also prevents nuisance attacks against both the subDAOs and the Helium DAO. HIP51 has described the onboarding of Hotspots but has not made this explicit. This HIP will clarify a few items around the onboarding fee. Specifically, Hotspots for which the minimum onboarding fee has not been burnt are not eligible for rewards. SubDAOs which are attempting to bypass this requirement will be subject to slashing.
+A minimum onboarding fee is necessary to:
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+1. Stop subDAOs from arbitrarily onboarding Hotspots. 
+2. And prevents nuisance attacks against subDAOs and the Helium DAO. 
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+HIP51 has described the onboarding of Hotspots but has not made this explicit. Hotspots for which the minimum onboarding fee has not been burnt are not eligible for rewards. SubDAOs attempting to bypass this requirement will be subject to slashing.
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 ## Stakeholders
 
 All network participants.
 
 ## Deployment Impact
 
-The migration to Solana requires every Hotspot to be onboarded to every subDAO individually as HIP51 intended. Existing Hotspots for which no onboarding fee has been burnt to a specific subDAO will have to rectify this to continue earning rewards for a subDAO.
+The migration to Solana requires every Hotspot to be onboarded to every subDAO individually, as HIP51 intended. Existing Hotspots for which no onboarding fee has been burnt to a specific subDAO will have to rectify this to continue earning rewards for a subDAO.