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README.md

@@ -5,7 +5,8 @@ allows an application to use an [stunnel](http://stunnel.org) to connect securel
 Heroku Redis.  It is meant to be used in conjunction with other buildpacks.
 
 > [!WARNING]
-> This buildpack is not compatible with `heroku-24`+ and is not needed for Redis 6+, which supports native TLS.
+> This buildpack isn’t compatible with [`heroku-24`](article link?) and later. You don’t need this buildpack for Redis 6+, which supports native TLS.
+
 > For more information, see [Securing Heroku Redis](https://devcenter.heroku.com/articles/heroku-redis#security-and-compliance).
 
 ## Usage

bin/compile

@@ -14,11 +14,12 @@ BUILD_DIR=$1
 BUILDPACK_DIR="$(dirname $(dirname $0))"
 
 if ! command -v stunnel4 > /dev/null; then
-    echo "!     stunnel not detected! stunnel not supported on heroku-24+"
-    echo "!     This buildpack is not required for Redis 6+. Remove this buildpack using:"
-    echo "!         $ heroku buildpacks:remove heroku/redis"
-    echo "!     And then follow the instructions for using Redis' native TLS support:"
-    echo "!     https://devcenter.heroku.com/articles/heroku-redis#security-and-compliance"
+
+    echo "! This buildpack uses stunnel, which isn’t supported on heroku-24 and later."
+    echo "! You don’t need this buildpack for Redis 6+. Remove it with the command:"
+    echo "! $ heroku buildpacks:remove heroku/redis"
+    echo "! To use Redis’ native TLS support, see https://devcenter.heroku.com/articles/heroku-redis#security-and-compliance."
+
     exit 1
 fi