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@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ <h1 class="span12 mainhead">Spirits Melted Into Air: <span>visualising performan
             <p><cite>&mdash; The Tempest, Act IV, Scene i</cite></p>
 
             <p><em>Spirits Melted Into Air</em> takes individual scenes or speeches - in this case, from the 2012 <a href="http://www.rsc.org.uk">Royal Shakespeare Company</a> productions of <em>Richard III</em> and <em>The Comedy of Errors</em> - and produces data-visualisations of actors' motion during them.</p>
-            <p>Produced by <a href="http://infovore.org">Tom Armitage</a> in conjuction with the <a href="http://www.rsc.org.uk/">Royal Shakespeare Company</a>, the work is in parts a technology prototype, data visualisation, and artwork.</p>
+            <p>Produced by <a href="http://infovore.org">Tom Armitage</a> for the <a href="http://www.rsc.org.uk/">Royal Shakespeare Company</a>, the work is in parts a technology prototype, data visualisation, and artwork.</p>
             <p>It explores stripping the text away from dramatic performance: removing the playwright, and leaving only the <em>production</em> elements - the actor, the director, and everyone else who influences a performance. The project seeks to highlight the work that the Royal Shakespeare Company does in bringing the written texts of Shakespeare's plays to life.</p>
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         <h2 class="span12">Capturing the data</h2>
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           <div class="pic"><a class="fancybox" title="Spirits Melted Into Air: the Processing application being used to trace Richard III. Note the skewed grid mapped to the stage." href="/img/spirits-ui.jpg"><img src="/img/spirits-ui.jpg" /></a></div>
-          <div class="caption">The Processing sketch in action. Click for more detail.</div>
+          <div class="caption">The Processing sketch in action. Click to see larger.</div>
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           <p>The data was captured from performance footage in a custom-built <a href="http://processing.org">Processing</a> application. The movements of the actors to be captured were individually traced from video using a mouse cursor.</p>