final touches on the colloquium presentation

kolloquium/index.html

@@ -130,19 +130,21 @@ <h3>I. The Platform: Pages</h3>
         <p class="centered"><img class="screenshot" src="assets/images/page_overview.png" /></p>
 			</section>
 
-			<section>
-				<h3>I. The Platform: Pages</h3>
+      <!-- <section>
+        <h3>I. The Platform: Pages</h3>
         <p class="centered"><img class="screenshot" src="assets/images/page_overview_admin.png" /></p>
-			</section>
+      </section> -->
 
-			<section>
-				<h3>I. The Platform: Pages</h3>
+      <!-- <section>
+        <h3>I. The Platform: Pages</h3>
         <p class="centered"><img class="screenshot" src="assets/images/upload_images.png" /></p>
-			</section>
+      </section> -->
 
 			<section>
 				<h3>I. The Platform: Pages</h3>
         <ul>
+          <li>To upload images a, user simply has to drag images from his filesystem into the browser</li>
+          <li>Additional elements are shown when the page owner is on the page</li>
           <li>Users can hide pages -> don't appear in overview but are reachable via the URL</li>
           <li>Users can show other users previews of their unfinished work</li>
           <!-- <li>Pages aggregate work of users</li> -->
@@ -173,7 +175,7 @@ <h3>I. The Platform: Images</h3>
 			</section>
 
 			<section>
-				<h3>I. The Platform: Images</h3>
+				<h3>I. The Platform: Forms</h3>
         <p class="centered"><img class="screenshot" src="assets/images/image_admin.png" /></p>
 			</section>
 
@@ -299,7 +301,7 @@ <h3>II. Benefits: Media</h3>
 				<h3>II. Benefits</h3>
 				<br />
 				<p class="centered">These slides are a Single Page Web App as well:</p>
-				<p class="centered tiny"><a href="#/31">A normal link</a></p>
+				<p class="centered tiny"><a href="#/29">A normal link</a></p>
 				<br />
 				<h4 id="start_sound">Start</h4>
         <h4 id="stop_sound">Stop</h4>
@@ -384,10 +386,10 @@ <h3>III. Appendix : Technology</h3>
 				<h3>III. Appendix : Acknowledgements</h3>
 				<ul>
 				  <li>My proofreaders: Dominik, Isabel, Thomas, Eray, Sebastian</li>
-				  <li>Jeremy Ashkenas for Backbone.js and CoffeeScript</li>
-				  <li>The brunch-team for brunch ;)</li>
+				  <li><a href="https://github.com/jashkenas">Jeremy Ashkenas</a> for Backbone.js and CoffeeScript</li>
+				  <li>The brunch-team for <a href="https://github.com/brunch/brunch">brunch</a> ;)</li>
 				  <li>Everyone that supported me while working on this thesis</li>
-				  <li>The author of this slide system: Hakim El Hattab</li>
+				  <li><a href="http://www.jamendo.com/en/artist/bradsucks">Brad Sucks</a> (the background music), <a href="http://hakim.se">Hakim El Hattab</a> (author of this slide system)</li>
 				</ul>
 			</section>