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-While browsing websites third-party resources track your online habits,
- which can be considered an invasion of privacy.
- It was previously unknown how many third-party resources, known trackers
- and tracker companies are represented on an average website.
+When you are browsing websites, third-party resources track your online
+ habits; such tracking can be considered an invasion of privacy.
+ It was previously unknown how many third-party resources, trackers and
+ tracker companies are present on an average website.
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- such as video, scripts and fonts make up a large portion of known trackers.
+ such as video, scripts and fonts make up a large portion of the known trackers
+ seen on a typical website.
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