edits by Bernhard

foreword.tex

@@ -26,19 +26,19 @@ \section*{Foreword -- Georg Greve}
   please feel free to replace Free Software by Open Source in your
   head if that is your preferred terminology.}  were co-dependent
 developments. As the Internet grew, our community could grow with it,
-but without the values and technology of our community, there is no
-doubt in my mind that the Internet would not have become the
+but without the values and technology of our community, I have no doubts
+that the Internet would not have become the
 all-encompassing network that we now see enabling people and groups
 around the world.
 
 Until today, our software runs most of the Internet, and you will know
-at least some of our software, such as Mozilla Firefox,
+at least some of it, such as Mozilla Firefox,
 OpenOffice.org, Linux, and perhaps even GNOME or KDE. But our
-technology may very well also be hidden inside your TV, your wireless
+technology may also be hidden inside your TV, your wireless
 router, your ATM, even your radio, security system or battleships. It
 is literally everywhere. 
 
-It was also essential in enabling quite some of the large corporations
+It was essential in enabling quite some of the large corporations
 that you know, such as Google, Facebook, Twitter and others. None of
 these could have achieved so much in such a short time if it were not
 for the power of software freedom that allowed them to stand on the
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@ \section*{Foreword -- Georg Greve}
 participant, this book might provide you with insights into a few
 facets and perspectives that are new to you.
 
-Because this book also contains important grains of that implicit
+Because this book contains important grains of that implicit
 knowledge which we usually build and transfer inside our
 sub-communities that work on different technologies. This knowledge
 typically trickles down from experienced contributors to less
-experienced contributors, which is why it seems very obvious and
+experienced ones, which is why it seems very obvious and
 natural to those socialized in our community.
 
 This is the same knowledge and culture of how to shape collaboration
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ \section*{Foreword -- Georg Greve}
 
 \textit{Georg Greve initiated the Free Software Foundation Europe in
 2000 and was its founding president until 2009. During this time he
-was responsible for building up and designing many of its activities
+was responsible for building up and designing many of FSFE's activities
 such as the Fellowship, the policy or legal work, and has worked
 intensively with many communities. Today he continues this work as
 shareholder and CEO of Kolab Systems AG, a fully Free Software company.