reword new lablel item

base/doc/ltnews37.tex

@@ -151,23 +151,23 @@ \section{New or improved commands}
 
 \subsection{Extension of the \cs{label} command}
 
-Up to now the \cs{label} command stored in standard \LaTeX{} into the
-\cs{newlabel} command in the \texttt{.aux} file two data: 
+Prevously, in standard \LaTeX{}, the \cs{label} command stored  into the
+\cs{newlabel} command in the \texttt{.aux} file two values: 
 \cs{@currentlabel}, which normally contains the state of the current 
 counter, and \cs{thepage} for the current page number.  \pkg{hyperref} and 
-\pkg{nameref} patch the \cs{label} command to store five data: 
+\pkg{nameref} patched the \cs{label} command to store five values: 
 Additionally they save \cs{@currentlabelname}, which normally contains the 
 current title text and can be retrieved with \cs{nameref} and 
 \cs{@currentHref} which is the name of the destination needed to create an 
-active link. The fifth data container is currently only used if external 
-references are loaded with the \pkg{xr-hyper} package. 
+active link. The fifth argument was only used if external 
+references were loaded with the \pkg{xr-hyper} package. 
 
-Starting with this release the number of arguments have be unified. 
+Starting with this release, the number of arguments have been unified. 
 \cs{label} now writes a
-\cs{newlabel} command containing five data: \cs{@currentlabel},
+\cs{newlabel} command containing five values: \cs{@currentlabel},
 \cs{thepage}, \cs{@currentlabelname}, \cs{@currentHref}. The fifth 
 container is reserved for the kernel and contains data needed for the 
-tagged PDF project. 
+tagged PDF project.
 
 Additionally a hook with the name \texttt{label} has been added. It is 
 executed before the writing to the \texttt{.aux} file. Code using