Stylistic improvements to the release anncouncement

NEWS

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 liblouis NEWS -- history of user-visible changes.  	-*- org -*-
 
 * Noteworthy changes in release 3.30.0 (2024-06-03)
-We are very excited to bring this release as a lot of enthusiasm and
-energy has been gone into it. A lot of of new contributors have
-improved liblouis and added support for new languages to it. We now
-have support for many ancient languages like Akkadian, Ugaritic,
-Biblical Hebrew or Syriac. There is also support for Yiddish now. Also
-the Dutch tables got a very innovative upgrade.
+We are very excited to present this release, as a lot of enthusiasm
+and energy have gone into it. A host of of new contributors have
+improved liblouis and added support for new languages. We now have
+support for many ancient languages, like Akkadian, Ugaritic, Biblical
+Hebrew and Syriac. This release also supports Yiddish. And the Dutch
+tables got a very innovative upgrade.
 
 I'd like to thank all the very dedicated contributors for helping to
 bring liblouis forward.