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 Choose the platform on which you want to run the Telemetry Collector. You can choose between **Helm**, **Mac**, **Windows**, or **Linux**. 
 
-* **Helm** users - Connectto the Kubernetes cluster from which you want to send telemetry, copy the Helm Install snippet, replace the placeholders with the relevant values, and run it in your terminal.
+* **Helm** users - Connect to the Kubernetes cluster from which you want to send telemetry, copy the Helm Install snippet, replace the placeholders with the relevant values, and run it in your terminal.
 * **Mac** users - Copy the snippet and run it in your terminal.
 * **Windows** users - Copy the snippet and run it in your PowerShell x64 **as Administrator** (Note that PowerShell x86 and PowerShell ISE are currently not supported).
 * **Linux** users - Copy the snippet and run it in your command line.
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 ##### Run the Telemetry Collector
 
-The Telemetry Collector will create all setters needed for the Helm install command to install Logz.io Helm chart and deploy the chart with the relevant parameters. Once running, the Telemetry Collector will continuously collect the relevant data from your end, and you'll be able to view and manage it in Logz.io.
+The Telemetry Collector will create all setters needed for the Helm install command to install Logz.io Helm chart and deploy the chart with the relevant parameters. Once running, the Telemetry Collector will continuously collect the relevant data from your end, and you can view and manage it in Logz.io.
 
 You can review the complete list of parameters and commands that Logz.io runs in the background [on the **Logzio Monitoring GitHub repository**](https://github.com/logzio/logzio-helm/tree/master/charts/logzio-monitoring).
 
-It might take a while for the Telemetry Collector to get up and running, after which you’ll be able to view your logs, metrics, or traces and get full observability into your system.
+It might take a while for the Telemetry Collector to get up and running, after which you can view your logs, metrics, or traces and get full observability into your system.
 
 ##### Optional - Select data sources
 
-You can configure the data sources the Telemetry Collector will collect. To do so, click on Advance settings at the top of the page. Next, you can edit and change telemetries will be collected by Logz.io. 
+You can configure the data sources the Telemetry Collector will collect. To do so, click on Advance settings at the top of the page. Next, you can edit and change telemetries, which Logz.io will collect.
 
 
 ![Select data source](https://dytvr9ot2sszz.cloudfront.net/logz-docs/telemetry-agent/select-data-sources-sep.png)
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 ##### Optional - Define your collector
 
-You can edit your collector's name and description, and choose which Logs, Metrics, and Tracing accounts the data will be sent. If you don't have active accounts, you'll be able to review the newly generated account names before continuing.
+You can edit your collector’s name and description and choose which Logs, Metrics, and Tracing accounts to use. If you don’t have active accounts, you’ll be able to review the newly generated account names before continuing.
 
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