COmments from John

dmtestmilstones.tex

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 LDM-503-4 & 2018-02-01 & NCSA & \textbf{Aux Tel DAQ integration functionality test}
 The production Aux Tel data acquisition hardware should be available in Tucson in 2018-02. We should prepare by testing the adjacent archive systems.
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-LDM-503-4b & 2018-02-12 & NCSA & \textbf{Test Report: Aux Tel DAQ interface Integration Verification and Spectrograph Operations Rehearsal}
+LDM-503-4b & 2018-02-12 & NCSA & \textbf{Test Report: Aux Tel DAQ interface Integration Verification and spectrograph operations rehearsal}
 The production Aux Tel data acquisition hardware should be available in Tucson in 2018-02. We should test integration with the adjacent archive systems.
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 LDM-503-5 & 2018-05-31 & NCSA & \textbf{Alert distribution validation}
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 Partial camera data should be available to DM July 31st. We plan to test DM stack with it.
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 LDM-503-8 & 2018-11-30 & NCSA & \textbf{Spectrograph data acquisition}
-Demonstrate that we can acquire (and process?) data from the Spectrograph.
+Demonstrate that we can acquire (and process?) data from the spectrograph.
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 LDM-503-9 & 2018-11-30 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification tests in advance of pre-ops rehearsal for commissioning \#1}
 Test how the system will run during commissioning.
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 LDM-503-12 & 2020-01-31 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification tests in advance of pre-ops rehearsal for commissioning \#3}
 Dress rehearsal: commissioning starts in April, so by this stage we should be ready to do everything needed.
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-LDM-503-13 & 2020-11-30 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification test in advance of Ops rehearsal DRP (ComCam data)}
+LDM-503-13 & 2020-11-30 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification test in advance of ops rehearsal DRP (ComCam data)}
 ComCam data will now be available. Demonstrate its use in producing a data release.
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 LDM-503-14 & 2021-03-31 & NCSA & \textbf{DM Software for Science Verification}
 Science Verification starts in April. Demonstrate that all required DM software is available.
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-LDM-503-15 & 2021-11-29 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification tests in advance of full scale ops rehearsal }
+LDM-503-15 & 2021-11-29 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification tests in advance of large scale ops rehearsal }
 Science Verification data will now be available. Demonstrate its use in producing a data release.
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-LDM-503-16 & 2022-02-28 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification test in advance od Ops rehearsal DRP }
+LDM-503-16 & 2022-02-28 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification test in advance of full DRP ops rehearsal}
 Test readiness for operations.
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-LDM-503-17 & 2022-09-30 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification tests full DRP }
+LDM-503-17 & 2022-09-30 & NCSA & \textbf{Verification tests of full DRP }
 Confirm readiness for operations.
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orstab.tex

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 Rehearsals for real operations which start  Nov 2021
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 Jan 2022 &  NCSA/Base &  \textbf{Operations rehearsal data release processing}
-Full Dress rehearsal for real data release
+Full dress rehearsal for real data release
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 Aug 2022 &  NCSA &  \textbf{Operations rehearsal for full data release processing (if needed).}