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DM-42781: Put the different time spans of the DP0.3 schema descriptions up front #185

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This change was made on a branch in August 2023 and lost in the shuffle.

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@gpdf gpdf changed the title DM-42781: Edit the DP0.3 schema descriptions to put the different time spans up front DM-42781: Put the different time spans of the DP0.3 schema descriptions up front Feb 5, 2024
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See comments for minor correction.

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
name: dp03_catalogs_10yr
"@id": "#dp03_catalogs_10yr"
description: >
Data Preview 0.3 contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science
Data Preview 0.3 (ten-year version) Contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science
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Minor change: Decapitalize "Contains"

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I struggled with that a bit. How would you feel about one of these alternatives:

  • The Data Preview 0.3 ten-year version contains the catalog products ...
  • Data Preview 0.3 (ten-year version): Contains the catalog products ...

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I struggled with that a bit. How would you feel about one of these alternatives:

  • The Data Preview 0.3 ten-year version contains the catalog products ...
  • Data Preview 0.3 (ten-year version): Contains the catalog products ...

The first one seems the most straightforward to me.

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I've opted for the version with the colons, after also considering parallelism with DP0.2.

Data Preview 0.3 contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science
Collaboration simulation of the results of SSO analysis of the wide-fast-deep data.
This set of tables is from analyzing only the first year of LSST observations.
Data Preview 0.3 (one-year version) Contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science
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Also decapitalize "Contains" here.

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See above.

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@gpdf will decide on the particular language for the description, so I'll approve as is.

@gpdf gpdf merged commit 7ac4e5a into main Feb 5, 2024
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@gpdf gpdf deleted the tickets/DM-42781 branch February 5, 2024 21:49
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