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DM-42781: Put the different time spans of the DP0.3 schema descriptions up front #185
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See comments for minor correction.
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name: dp03_catalogs_10yr | |||
"@id": "#dp03_catalogs_10yr" | |||
description: > | |||
Data Preview 0.3 contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science | |||
Data Preview 0.3 (ten-year version) Contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science |
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Minor change: Decapitalize "Contains"
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I struggled with that a bit. How would you feel about one of these alternatives:
- The Data Preview 0.3 ten-year version contains the catalog products ...
- Data Preview 0.3 (ten-year version): Contains the catalog products ...
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I struggled with that a bit. How would you feel about one of these alternatives:
- The Data Preview 0.3 ten-year version contains the catalog products ...
- Data Preview 0.3 (ten-year version): Contains the catalog products ...
The first one seems the most straightforward to me.
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I've opted for the version with the colons, after also considering parallelism with DP0.2.
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Data Preview 0.3 contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science | ||
Collaboration simulation of the results of SSO analysis of the wide-fast-deep data. | ||
This set of tables is from analyzing only the first year of LSST observations. | ||
Data Preview 0.3 (one-year version) Contains the catalog products of a Solar System Science |
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Also decapitalize "Contains" here.
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See above.
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@gpdf will decide on the particular language for the description, so I'll approve as is.
This change was made on a branch in August 2023 and lost in the shuffle.