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jenniferdewan
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Jun 22, 2022
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- 1st change: I think it flows better and shows the real difference between the goal of the game and things you do in game.
- 2nd change: Firstly, commas represent “and” but for the first comma, a “but” is more appropriate. Secondly, I changed the order of information in the sentence to make it have more flow and make it easier to see the steps.
- 3rd change: The original is not using the colon properly. Can easily be fixed or replaced with a comma.
- 4th change: Overseeable is not a word. Checked on the Merriam-Webster Dictionary.
- 1st change: I think it flows better and shows the real difference between the goal of the game and things you do in game. - 2nd change: Firstly, commas represent “and” but for the first comma, a “but” is more appropriate. Secondly, I changed the order of information in the sentence to make it have more flow and make it easier to see the steps. - 3rd change: The original is not using the colon properly. Can easily be fixed or replaced with a comma. - 4th change: Overseeable is not a word. Checked on the Merriam-Webster Dictionary.
lxgr-linux
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README.md
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| @@ -52,12 +52,13 @@ For non gameplay related usage see `--help`. | |||
| Try it out [online](https://replit.com/@lxgr-linux/pokete). | |||
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| ## How to play? | |||
| Imagine you're a Pokete-Trainer and your goal is it to run around in the world and catch/train as many Poketes as possible and to get the best trainer. | |||
| Imagine you’re a Pokete-Trainer and you run around in the world to catch/train as many Poketes as possible with the ultimate goal of becoming the best trainer. | |||
lxgr-linux
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Jun 23, 2022
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