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@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@ As a user with `root` privileges, open your `php.ini` file and search for the va
 
 ## Garbage collection configuration {#session-gc}
 
-To clean up expired sessions Magento application calls `gc` (_garbage collection_) handler randomly according to probability which is calculated by `gc_probability / gc_divisor`. For example, if we set these directives to `1/100` respectively, it means a probability of `1%` (_probability of one call of garbage collection per 100 requests_).
+To clean up expired sessions, Magento calls the `gc` (_garbage collection_) handler randomly according to a probability that is calculated by the `gc_probability / gc_divisor` directive. For example, if you set these directives to `1/100` respectively, it means a probability of `1%` (_probability of one call of garbage collection per 100 requests_).
 
-The garbage collection handler uses the `gc_maxlifetime` directive - the number of seconds after which the sessions will be seen as _garbage_ and potentially cleaned up.
+The garbage collection handler uses the `gc_maxlifetime` directive—the number of seconds after which the sessions will be seen as _garbage_ and potentially cleaned up.
 
-On some operating systems (Debian/Ubuntu) `session.gc_probability` set to `0` by default, and the garbage collection handler will never be executed.
+On some operating systems (Debian/Ubuntu), the default `session.gc_probability` directive is `0`, which prevents the garbage collection handler from running.
 
-`session.gc_` directives from the `php.ini` file can be overwritten in `<magento_root>/app/etc/env.php`:
+You can overwrite the `session.gc_` directives from the `php.ini` file in the `<magento_root>/app/etc/env.php` file:
 
 ```php
  'session' =>
@@ -47,4 +47,5 @@ On some operating systems (Debian/Ubuntu) `session.gc_probability` set to `0` by
       'gc_maxlifetime' => 1440
  ),
 ```
-The configuration depends on the traffic and specific needs of a certain Magento application.
+
+The configuration depends on the traffic and specific needs of a certain Magento application.