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 01:05:22 Not... Ayanami? 
 01:05:28 Bones? [?] 
 01:05:30 Yes, all of the failures of infinity. Don't let them weigh upon your mind. 
-01:05:42 We're nearly at Lilith's barrier. The Main Shaft is completely blocked, keeping anyone from intruding over the past 14 years. 
+01:05:42 We're nearly at Lilith's barrier. 
+01:05:45 The Main Shaft is completely blocked, keeping anyone from intruding over the past 14 years. 
 01:05:56 [???] 
 01:06:00 It's all right. Eva-13 was made for breaking through this. The two of us can do it. 
 01:06:15 Try to join tempos. Remember the piano duet. 
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 01:07:07 We've arrived. The deepest part of Central Dogma. The epicenter of Third Impact. 
 01:07:21 Is this Lilith? 
 01:07:23 It once was. It is her corpse. 
-01:07:27 Misato-san... Even though we tried to protect it with our lives... Uh.... That's an Eva? 
-01:07:35 Yes, the Eva Mark.06. Remodeled into an independent type, exploitation by the Lilin brought the unit to a state of ruin. 
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-That thing that is piercing it.. Is our target?
-Yes, Longinus and Cassius, to wield both of the spears requires two souls
-That is why we have the Double Entry System.
-If that's the case, why can't we just use the "other pilot" behind us?
-No, an imitation of Lilin cannot be used.
-The location of the soul is different
-Well, let's begin
-Wait a minute, something is wrong.
-What is wrong, Kaworu?
-This is not right...Both of the spears has changed into similar shape.
-Let's just pull the spears quickly!
-That is the reason we came here in this Eva.
-What is happening?
-No 2? Asuka!
-What are you doing Asuka?
-Stupid Shinji? I can't believe it, you are piloting an Eva!?
-That is right, I'm piloting this Eva, I'm going to change the world!
-You little brat, if that's the case, don't pilot it again!
-Support fire, you're late again!
-Sorry sorry~ 
-Adam's vessel-san.. 
-At least, allow me to stop your plan~
-Why are you interfering Asuka? That is our spear of hope!
-Stop! Doing! Unnecessary things!
-Are you planning to start another third impact?
-You are wrong! I'm trying to fix everything, I'm trying to save the world!
-You really are a little brat.
+01:07:27 Misato-san, even though we tried to protect it with our lives... 
+01:07:32 Uh.... That's an Eva? 
+01:07:35 Yes, the Eva Mark.06. 
+01:07:38 Remodeled into an independent type, exploitation by the Lilin brought the unit to a state of ruin. 
+01:07:48 That thing that is piercing it... is our target?
+01:07:52 Yes, Longinus and Cassius, to wield both of the spears requires two souls.
+01:08:00 That is why we have the Double Entry System.
+01:08:04 If that's the case, why can't we just use the "other pilot" behind us?
+01:08:08 No, an imitation of Lilin cannot be used.
+01:08:10 The location of the soul is different.
+01:08:14 Well, let's begin
+01:08:23 Wait a minute, something is wrong.
+01:08:26 What's wrong, Kaworu-kun?
+01:08:31 This is not right... Both of the Spears have changed into a similar shape.
+01:08:36 Let's just pull the Spears quickly!
+01:08:38 That's why we came here in this Eva.
+01:08:44 What's going on?!
+01:08:55 Eva-02? 
+01:08:57 Asuka!
+01:09:00 What are you doing, Asuka?!
+01:09:05 Stupid Shinji?! 
+01:09:06 I can't believe it, you are piloting an Eva!?
+01:09:09 That's right. Piloting this Eva, I'm going to change the world!
+01:09:14 You little brat...
+01:09:15 Fine, have it your way!
+01:09:25 Support fire, you're late again!
+01:09:27 Sorry, sorry!
+01:09:28 Adam's vessel-san,
+01:09:31 allow me to stop your plan, at least...
+01:09:54 Why are you interfering, Asuka? 
+01:09:56 That is our Spear of Hope! [Those are...?]
+01:10:01 Stop! Doing! Unnecessary things!
+01:10:05 You brat, Shinji! 
+01:10:06 Are you planning to start another Third Impact?
+01:10:09 You're wrong! I'm trying to fix everything! 
+01:10:12 I'm trying to save the world!
+01:10:16 You really are a little brat.
 
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