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README.md

@@ -6,28 +6,32 @@ and a walkthrough to replicate it.
 ## Walkthrough
 
 First of all, we'll need to register a new application with the Facebook platform. To do so,
-go to [facebook.com/developers](http://www.facebook.com/developers), click on the "set up new app"-button
-and create your application. Once you have created your application, you'll be presented with a daunting
-number of options. Don't worry, though; they're all optional and we don't need to configure any of them just yet.
+go to [facebook.com/developers](http://www.facebook.com/developers) and create your application.
+Once you have confirmed that you are in fact human, you'll be presented with a daunting number of
+options. Don't worry, though; they're all optional and we only need to configure two of them right now.
+Populate the "canvas page" field with the URL you'd like your application to be accessed from
+(f.ex. 'http://apps.facebook.com/myapp') and the "canvas url" field with the URL that Facebook may
+load your application from (f.ex. 'http://myserver.com/myapp'). You'll find both fields under
+"Facebook integration".
 
-Create a new Django project and install Fandjango:
+Next, create a new Django project and install Fandjango:
 
     $ django-admin.py startproject myfacebookapplication
     $ pip install fandjango
 
-Add fandjango to your list of installed applications, adjust your database settings and synchronize
+Add fandjango to your list of installed applications, adjust your database settings and populate
 it like you regularly would:
 
     $ vim settings.py
     $ ./manage.py syncdb
 
 Fandjango needs some configuration. Specifically, you need to add its middleware to your middleware classes and specify
-your application's id, secret key and url (all of which can be found on [facebook.com/developers](http://www.facebook.com/developers)
+your application's id, secret key and canvas url (all of which can be found on [facebook.com/developers](http://www.facebook.com/developers))
 in your settings file:
 
     FACEBOOK_APPLICATION_ID = 118434614903049
     FACEBOOK_SECRET_KEY = '8cce95c678d2cd3f51f11e7cce03cd21'
-    FACEBOOK_APPLICATION_URL = 'http://apps.facebook.com/myfacebookapplication'
+    FACEBOOK_APPLICATION_URL = 'http://apps.facebook.com/myapp'
 
     MIDDLEWARE_CLASSES = [
         'django.middleware.common.CommonMiddleware',
@@ -41,7 +45,7 @@ in your settings file:
 *Note:* If you're using Django's built-in CSRF protection middleware, you need to make sure Fandjango's middleware precedes it.
 Otherwise, Facebook's requests to your application will qualify cross-site request forgeries.
 
-Next, define a view and route it:
+Now define a view and route it:
 
     # urls.py
 
@@ -57,9 +61,6 @@ Next, define a view and route it:
     @facebook_authorization_required()
     def home(request):
         return HttpResponse('Hello, %s' % request.facebook.user.first_name)
-        
-Deploy your project, return to your application's settings at [facebook.com/developers](http://www.facebook.com/developers)
-and specify the "canvas page" and "canvas url" settings under the "facebook integration" tab accordingly.
 
-That's it! You have created a Facebook application that authorizes and greets its users. Navigate to the URL you specified
-in the "canvas url" setting to have a closer look at your new marvel of technology.
+That's it! You have created a Facebook application that authorizes and greets its users. Navigate to your application's canvas URL
+to have a closer look at your new marvel of technology.