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Update URL on #20 #110

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@kant kant commented Dec 21, 2017

Plus minor fixes (proposal)

Plus minor fixes (proposal)
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thanks! only a few minor comments.

@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ with gaze. Click or air tap to place the earth and start the experience.
* SolarSystem
* Galaxy

The above states cannot be skipped and contain voice over the introduce the
The above states cannot be skipped and contain voice over that introduce the
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@@ -17,23 +17,23 @@ interact.
# HoloLens Tools

Download all of the developer tools from the
[Microsoft Developer Website](http://lens.ms/Sa37sr)
[Microsoft Developer Website](https://developer.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/mixed-reality/install_the_tools?Ocid=Hololens%20-%20Education_Social_TWITTER_HoloLens_20160330_413089651&utm_source=Direct)
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I think we should keep the short URL. That way we can redirect to a different site from there and not have to update this document.

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@kant : are you still there? Can you make the requested changes?

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